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Re: I Answer Animal Questions
I hope you don't mind me dropping in to answer part of this one, @JoeBookman, but I have a lot of friends who are marine biologists (though I prefer terrestrial ...
Jan 27, 2018 -
Re: Asthmatic Character?
Pollen doesn't bother me, and I'm not allergic, but the things that do bother me are cigarette smoke (but not woodsmoke since I grew up around a lot of it) ...
Jan 27, 2018 -
Re: Knights of the Green Room Great Hall
*coughs whike surreptitiously slipping Squire @rosette some Training Knives *
Jan 20, 2018 -
Re: (Un)Timely Reviews
Done with Lumi's. Need to finish this one:
Jan 18, 2018 -
Re: Knights of the Green Room Great Hall
Then sally forth, Squire @rosette, and slay Ten Green Beasts . Bring back their heads (or tails, or the least-icky bit of body you don't mind touching--a lock of hair ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Asthmatic Character?
On a side note, kinda, one scenario that could naturally highlight him having asthma is him struggling with breathing in cold weather. It depends on the climate of your setting, ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Farm ownership questions!(Are horse stories still loved?)
I think every girl goes through a horse-crazy phase at some point, and some girls never grow out of it. Girls being crazy about horses is a stereotype in and ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Murder on the Holiday Express
Except for Kyll who, having been shut inside the soundproofed confines of the cookie-and-coffee cupboard, heard nothing of the goings on outside. Not the scream. Not the dramatic CLAP OF ...
Dec 13, 2017 -
Re: Murder on the Holiday Express
Meanwhile, in the ashes of @Sheytato's potato museum, a solitary Kyll munched on some well-roasted tubers and watched the murder train roll on by. It had been a while since ...
Dec 3, 2017 -
Re: Advice for the format of my story?
I think the journal entries approach works, but something you could potentially try is first person present tense, so that way you get the closeness of first person with the ...
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: Wordlbuilding/Character Questionnaires
I don't use templates or questionnaires myself, so sadly, I don't have any to recommend. Some things I do consider for my own worldbuilding are things like climate, number of ...
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: Serious Writing Trouble?
Have you tried focusing on just getting words out, regardless of quality, and leaving the editing for a later draft. I used to run into blocks all the time because ...
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: How did you find YWS?
A long, long time ago in a forum long since dead, a Kyll encountered a link after suffering burnout from another writing-oriented site. Several layout changes and much lurking later, ...
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: REPRESENT! (A contest by Queer Inklings)
Cool. I'm rounding the pot up to an evenly-divisible 20k so you should all be receiving 5k points apiece. Congratulations and thanks for participating!
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: REPRESENT! (A contest by Queer Inklings)
We judges are discussing a change to the prizes since there were only four entries, and we feel it wouldn't be fair for one person to not win anything when ...
Dec 1, 2017
