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I feel compelled to point out that the system you have going and the system of alchemy in FMA are completely different. The alchemy in FMA is actually a really ...

Except that the scenario you described is not a case of positive discrimination. The choice between assigning someone missing a leg a job that requires standing or assigning them a ...

So, if girls are from Earth and boys are from outer space, I guess everyone else is extra-dimensional?

You can also offset the story into its own scene to help make the distinction between the story proper and the story-within-the-story more distinct. That way, if you do switch ...

How sad that no one's replied to this sooner. Anyways, the one thing that stuck out to me was how magic fits into this. Is the disaster caused by magic? ...

I think it might be fun to modify the Twin Mask version so that one is frowning. It could act as a little shout-out to the drama masks. They're also ...

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No, it is not original. As I said, that particular fall into darkness is pretty common. I think you'd be surprised how many antagonists/villains have that as their core motivation, ...

This is a bit late, but you could always argue about why serial killers are successful at killing so many. Alternatively you could argue about how serial killers always make ...

What you're basically trying to do is solve one of the equations for a single variable and then using that first solved equation to solve the second one. A simple ...