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Re: Float
Thanks you two. :3 I don't normally write romance, and this is my first dabble into fluff, so your comments were very helpful. This could be me just being nit ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter One
Frost covered the grass, giving it a silver sheen under the dimly lit streetlights. I had managed to find myself some small black shoes, so my feet were protected from ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Float
Float It was the last day of summer, balmy and bright, and Danny and I were drinking root beer floats outside our favorite soda fountain. Women passed by in skimpy ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Supernatural Deliverance
I woke up feeling dizzy and painful. My head thumped like drum beats passing by and coming back again. How can you feel painful? And how can drum beats pass ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Diaries of a Teenage Vampire: Chapter One
As the spelling/grammar stuff has already been mentioned, I shan't say anything else on the matter. That said, you really do need tags for your dialogue. We readers have no ...
Mar 14, 2009
