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  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Milk in bags

    I just have to wonder how you transport those things safely. Plastic jugs? They can take a beating without leaking. A bag? All it takes is a little hole and ...

    Jan 4, 2016
  • Writing Tips Re: Any tips on writing descriptions of people?

    Ultimately what it comes down to is that characters in writing are more memorable for the things they do rather than their supposed physical appearances. Even people who claim to ...

    Dec 26, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Nova or Nora

    I want to point out that "Nora" in Japanese means "Stray" (as in the "Noragami" anime that means "Stray God") and something like that. If it suits your story, then ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Research Re: Time lines and time skips

    It sounds like you have a purpose for the switching, which is good. I'm wondering why you are worried about the switching though. If you're worried about the audience being ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Lounge, The Re: Replacing the Writing Gooder block

    I'm all for featuring the top 5 reviewers, with a link to the Leaderboards.

    Dec 18, 2015
  • Writing Tips Re: Location?

    The parking garage is a lot more plausible, and depending on how late it is, the garage would be pretty empty, not just of people but of cars as well. ...

    Dec 11, 2015
  • Research Re: One Sentence Pitch

    My first impression is that your pitch is very cliche. There's several reasons: the phrases you use ("darkest demons" is particularly glaring) are so common as to be trite, and ...

    Dec 11, 2015
  • Research Archives Re: Feline therapy

    Well, for starters, chiropractic care probably wouldn't help since chiropractics focuses on the spine. As for exercises, it really depends on the cause of the withering. If the problem is ...

    Dec 6, 2015
  • WRFF Archive Re: (Un)Timely Reviews

    Just a note that I'm working on your story @Lavenderfields. I just have to get through the queue of requests people made outside this thread. >.>

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Too dark for yws?

    @Deskro You'll need to use the URL tags to make links work in your signature. @Sherri Research is always a good idea. ;P To be fair, not a lot of ...

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Choosing a Genre

    I'd just like to drop in the side note that genres are more a marketing thing than a writing thing. Genres are just groupings of stories that share common traits ...

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Any way to save this from cliche?

    Execution will determine whether or not something feels cliche or not, but you can't judge the execution if it hasn't been written out. A lot of stories have very similar ...

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Too dark for yws?

    @Sherri The Writers Corner forum is more than just a place to ask project-specific questions: it's also a place to advertise your project. The most successful advertisements in the past ...

    Nov 28, 2015
  • WRFF Archive Re: (Un)Timely Reviews

    Still open.

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Research Re: Publishing a novel

    On a side note, if you buy a physical copy of Writers Market, it comes with complementary access to exclusive website content. The Deluxe edition comes with a majorly-discounted one-year ...

    Oct 27, 2015


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