Kale

I've been working on this on and off for the past three months or so (a couple minutes here, ten minutes there...) and, aside from the colors (which I am ...

Hello, evil_kookies (did you mean cookies or crazies?). I shall be your reviewer today. First things first: the summary. Love, Homosexuality, Lesbianship,& Much more. The story summary should briefly

It's not a bad start, but this poem could use quite a bit of improvement, mainly with respect to rhythm. The rhyme scheme was fine, but a rhyme scheme isn't ...

First impression: fix the damn formatting. Now. It hurts to read. Their presence disturbed none, M-dash or colon rather than comma. face spurted with dark mud. In my opinion, splattered ...

The rhyme really felt forced, and you sacrificed coherency for rhyme scheme. Not good. And, where are the periods? You used commas for periods which is not good at all. ...

But I haven’t been called by those names in a long while. You only mentioned one name, though. Gods cannot be killed, this is still true. But there are ways ...

Hello there! Here is my current pet project, The Death of the Dark Lord Thirilight , which is a comedic fantasy parody. I currently have 7 of 30ish chapters written, ...

Like Krupp said, that isn't lying. Everyone exaggerates, even if they aren't writers. Take the fisherman and the story of the fish that got away. Or the party that everyone ...

This story was like one of those train wrecks you can't look away from. You know the outcome, but you just can't stop staring. I like. :3

Well, do you have to write the story from you MC's PoV? If not, writing primarily from the friend's PoV shouldn't be an issue. If you do have to write ...

Thanks you two. :3 Glad you both enjoyed it. I would change "aggrieved" to displeased. I intended for "aggrieved" in this case to mean troubled or worried rather than offended ...

So, you have a discerning English teacher who usually recommends classics to her students, and she hands the main character The Host by Stephanie Meyer. I'm sorry. That just completely ...

Fantasy Name Generator They have both a simple and advanced interface. The advanced interface is very useful when you want variations on a name or if you want a name ...

*sigh* I haven't written a word in five months. I just have no inspiration! I had some drafts I was going to continue working on, but I re-read them, and ...

Lovely article! I didn't see anything that needed expanding on, and everything was concise and easy to understand. n_n The same thing goes if you switch styles very close to ...