Kale

Thanks for the reviews. n_n I haven't read Thirry's story. Is this a prologue to it, or...? It's more of a side-story and intended to mostly stand alone. You don't ...

Oh dear... Where to start? The beginning is as good as any, I suppose... The funeral scene Is it really necessary? As far as I can tell, it is all ...

I almost forgot. Wasn't Arthur wounded in the first chapter? What's he doing running out and about, battling the forces of evil? Also, when did he get the wound treated? ...

So... The entire family plus Black are inside a barn, asleep, and the authorities only take the father? And then they leave behind a ransom note? Why? They could have ...

Lyra Goodfellow was the perfect vicar's daughter - the cream of the crop; pride and joy of her family; her temperament, dreamy; her constitution, rosy; her etiquette, flawless. She learnt ...

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed this. n_n Thirry's story is a comedy? how so? It's kind of tough to explain. XD All sorts of things, good and bad and ridiculous, ...

Thanks. It was a bit of a challenge figuring out how a three-year old would think, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. :D

Killing Tweety Johnathan Singer Junior, or little Johnny, as everyone called him, was ecstatic. Today was his cousin's birthday party, and she was having it at Fast Wheels, the nearby ...

The Enchanter There was blood everywhere. Her blood. It coated the floor, the wall, the curtains, the window. So much blood pooling around her prone form. Just like the first ...

The Reaper's Heart I A long, long time ago, on a mountain ruled by Time Lived a Woman, fair and radiant, but not of Flesh or Mind, But rather of ...

That was an excellent first chapter. I hope you post the next chapter soon; I want to read the rest of this. I actually don't have anything to critique. This ...

its altitude so towering Altitude is a location (noun) and not a descriptor (adjective). The dying light smoldered beneath the crimson cloud; the sun’s concluding breath now hid from view. ...

First thing I'd like to point out is that the paragraph breaks are off. For instance: I turned to look at him and nearly feel over as his blood red ...

When i first went there i walked with a big beach bag loaded with a towel, a book, my iPod, and my cell phone. Is it important to know every ...

Night fell quickly; darkness draped over the serene village, lit only by the rainbow colours of twinkling Christmas lights. A full stop would work better than a semicolon. Darkness is ...