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"Once upon a time..." A phrase I am certain you have heard countless times. A phrase so often used to begin a tale. A phrase I absolutely detest. Why, you ...

Well, narrative poems are stories, the only difference being they are in verse. I've found that writing out narrative poems first as stories makes it easier to write the poem. ...

Hello Hippie. Remember me? :P Have you braced yourself? Good. Because I didn't find much. :D In fact, I only have a couple of quibbles. “Arthur are you alright ? ...

This definitely has a lot of potential, and I enjoyed reading, especially how you describe the goddess. :3 You just need to smooth out a couple wrinkles. For instance, the ...

Almost everyone here knows that your characters have to be a realistic as possible. A lot of people here hears their characters voices in their heads, and talks or writes ...

Thanks for the feedback. :D @Krupp - Well, this is intended just as a short, one-shot story. I don't usually listen to music while writing, but I'll take a look ...

I enjoyed writing this chapter. It still needs a bit of refining (and a bit of a trim), though. :P --- To: King Carl of Caeldon My liege, As of ...

Hi there! I'm Kyllorac (though you can call me Kyll or Kylie), and I'll be reviewing you today. Seeing as how you're new, I'm not sure you're aware that it's ...

Well, I decided to try writing a short story based on the results of a random plot generator just to see if I could, and this was the result I ...

The numbers add up. :D 10* x (3.14/180) = 0.0174444444

Sorry this is so late. I was sick, and then I had the entire review typed up but lost it after accidentally pressing the back button... Blood drips slowly into ...

I'm pretty sure this is correct, but it's been a while since I took trig. ^^; I hope the horribly inaccurate diagram makes sense. Basically, the 10* position of the ...

Long chapter up ahead in which Thirry makes his return to consciousness! :P --- The New Overlord or I've Been Stabbed in the Liver and You Want Me to Do ...

Glad you both enjoyed it. :D I think you meant taken? Not take in? No. I meant "take in." He is taking in her love like a black hole takes ...

Thanks you guys. :3 Your reviews make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. This sentence has a few minor things - first of all, it's a run-on. Second of ...