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Chapter I - The Fox "Wake up, Fox." The Fox lazily opened one brilliant blue eye to gaze at the creature who had wakened him. "What is it, Wolf?" he ...

Thanks you three, especially you, Hannah, for the reviews. @Hannah - My ego took a pretty hard blow, but it will live, and I can see where you're coming from. ...

In that case, they did know about heart attacks. They didn't call them heart attacks, though. A weak heart is how they referred to it, and if the person died, ...

It would help if you told us what time period your story takes place in.

Thanks, you two. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. @delphi - The "and"s are there for the sake of rhythm and overall flow. If you remove them, the sentence does ...

Written for a picture prompt. The picture can be found here , for those who are curious. --- Angel A glint of silver. A flash of gold. Vibrant red dimmed ...

he was a slave and a prisoner, and jasmine You forgot to capitalize Jasmine. Jed, now alone in the darkened room, lay completely silent and still on his back. He ...

Woah. Lots of reviews. o_o Thanks, everyone, for the feedback. :D @Wilgot - Thanks for reminding me about metaphors. :D @Meadow - "Tsarevich Ivan" is very similar to "The Golden ...

Thanks for the feedback you two. :3 @spring - I already used that site, but they don't have many synonyms for the color or made of gold golden, which is ...

Hello there. I am Kyllorac, and I'll be reviewing you today. I'm not sure if you're aware, but there is a rule that you must review two other stories before ...

Hello, Fortuna. I'm Kyllorac, and I'll be reviewing you today. :D Your spelling and grammar were superb overall. I caught a couple missing/misplaced commas, but I think you'll be able ...

I'm trying my hand at rendering a fairytale. This story is mainly a blending of "Tsarevich Ivan, the Fire Bird, and the Gray Wolf," "The Golden Bird," and various classical ...

Thanks for the feedback. :D Reading each of your different reactions has been very enlightening. @Mars and Kaitelyn - I do believe that this poem can stand alone without the ...

In psychology, one's shadow is comprised of the all the hidden and repressed desires a person has, hidden and repressed because they are the undesirable aspects of our personality. --- ...

The only reason drinking animal's blood is overused is because it's practical. :P No complaints to be had from me on that matter. A fat droplet of water dripped onto ...