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Lorelei Come now, child, and sit ye near – A story I would have you hear Of Lorelei, my Laura-Lee, Once-fair maiden turned nixie. When sailor love turned sailor free, ...

Hi there. This story looks interesting, so I'll be taking a go at it. It'll probably be a while, though; I like to be thorough. :D

Call me strange, but I liked this. It's morbid not in the blood-and-gore-and-carnage way but in the more subtle how-can-they-talk-about-it-so-casually type of way. :3 It's also a pretty unique take ...

Just a little note beforehand. Due to Shakespeare being Shakespeare, there is an overabundance of double entendres that simply do not translate well into everyday English (he was a pervy, ...

I wish I could take credit for the hilarity, but it is mostly Shakespeare's doing. "Romeo and Juliet," contrary to popular belief, was written to be a comedy . The ...

Hi there. I'm Kyllorac, and I'll be reviewing you today. What I'm going to tell you may be harsh, but just keep in mind that I'm trying to help you. ...

Just a little not beforehand. Due to Shakespeare being Shakespeare, there is an overabundance of double entendres that simply do not translate well into everyday English (he was a pervy, ...

Wow. O_O That was fast. XD @Wooster - The slit is actually a glimpse of the dark back feathers, only I forgot to go back and make it look feathery. ...

For one thing, it's way too big. Try resizing it down to maybe a quarter of what it is now, and crop off the empty space on the sides. As ...

I'm really happy with how this one turned out. The beak is a tad too long and slender, but not bad for a first try, hm? :D I hope this ...

Hi there! I'll be reviewing you today. Sorry if it seems a bit harsh; I'm not trying to be mean. :D When my demonic side can come out and ravage ...

This is the tale of the mysterious and immortal freedom fighter ninja known only by the name whispered on bated breath during games of Chinese Whispers with Auld Lang Syne ...

Well I'm not that fluent in typing. So I will miss some keys or type some extra on mistake, okay? That is why it is a good idea to proofread ...

Thank you, everyone. :D You're all so helpful. "Blazed?" That's a pretty unusual verb. Its usual meaning is "to shine brightly" so I'm not sure if this is the right ...

about 14 of age stepped out About fourteen whats? I believe you're missing "years." Also, when writing, spell out fourteen instead of just using the numbers. The general rule is ...