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Those tribes also come from very different geographical areas, so I would be leery of mixing and matching. The stationary nature of those tribes also doesn't match up with the ...

I would recommend putting the scene under a spoiler or something to separate it from the rest of your post. It was really confusing reading your explanation and then realizing ...

I would say work on the one you love best. You'll be more likely to put your best work into it and have the most fun writing it.

Well, I do see two major issues with the idea as-presented. 1) When you say "Native American culture", which tribe are you using as your model? 2) If "The Great ...

As Lefty already mentioned, using the WRFF forum is a great way to get more feedback. Just be sure to read the rules first as they contain a lot of ...

Depending on how long the verse is, you have several options. Typically, the longer the verse, the more likely it will be offset from the regular text, usually by a ...

You say that like it's a bad thing.

@Rydia The dodo is fine. It amuses me greatly. I just didn't know I was the dodo.

I had no idea I was the dodo.

I'll have you know I'm more like a rectangular prism.

@Snoink Considering the number of times I've had to clean up shattered glass and spilled milk from the upholstery... At least smashed eggs are still in the carton and thus ...

I get my milk in glass bottles. It's more expensive than the plastic jugs until you factor in the whopping $2 recycling credit per bottle. Plus, since the milk I ...

Done, even though this thread is supposed to be closed. ._.

This was posted as a reply to someone else's question, but a lot of the advice applies to yours as well:

There's pretty much no wrong way to write so long as writing actually gets done and achieves the intended goals. Do whatever works for you, and don't be afraid to ...