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OMG! Nate! You actually made everyone bright pink. O_O No more crazy ideas for you, methinks. Now, where did I put my sunglasses...

The repetition in this is lovely, and the rhyme doesn't sound forced at all. From the first line, it had me hooked, and flowed wonderfully, for the most part. Also, ...

Some emotions more terrible than hate. Brother Dear Oh, brother dear (not dear to me), Could I care less what you do? It should be no concern of mine Is ...

This was just lovely, and there is nothing I can really see to crit, which is really great. :D I'm curious, though, why you used contractions for "see it," "in ...

Oh my lord! How did i get on the featured works list? Is it based on how many views you have, or what? It's based on how many people gave ...

Very short, but I can really relate to this. I really hate saying goodbye. However, I'm wondering why you have every line ending in a comma. Poems, for the most ...

A quick little poem prompted by a random word generator since I haven't written any poetry in a while. To Lie: To lie is: to believe in a false truth, ...

As already mentioned, the first stanza gives a very different impression than the rest of the poem. That's easily fixed, though; just mention that the narrator is also taking part ...

Maybe if the gold star was back at the top of a work? For literary works, I often hit the reply button at the top of the page, not the ...

Ah, back when I first joined, before I discovered the chat, I remember a couple of my pieces made it into the Featured Works. It was then that I knew ...

I liked the repetition of the first stanza at the end; it was a very nice touch. That said, though, the body of the poem lacked any unique or strong ...

So what Kyllorac is suggesting is...remove the Instructors and keep the Greeters. Is this it? Is there something here that I'm not understanding? More like creating a group to help ...

Honestly, I have no clue what you were trying to say with this poem. What is like running through an archway? How does it relate to being a wandering soul? ...

Of course you could forego that and just have the JM's work overtime on it :P I thought what Kyllorac was proposing was kind of like what the JMs did/are ...

Overall, I like the proposed changes a lot. I'm a bit leery about nixing the review requirement entirely (is it really up to a 5:1 ratio? O_O) since it was ...