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My impression of the first stanza is that you tried too hard to make it rhyme, and that it needs proper punctuation. The lack of the latter obscures the meaning, ...

This poem had such a lovely flow and feel to it, and the line breaks were very well placed. I liked the lack of capitalization and punctuation; it really added ...

There was no flow to this poem, and it felt very disjointed. You also repeated a lot of words and phrases; in a poem as short as this, it comes ...

Hey there. I haven't read any of the other chapters, so if some of my questions have been answered earlier in the story, feel free to disregard them. Before I ...

I tried to change my password around 6:50 PM EST, but I ran into an error. I tried again at 6:55 and ran into the same error. I'm running Firefox ...

Not my first review ever, but it's the oldest one I can find. It is a bit dark, and very rhythmic. Could do with another verse, in my opinion, but ...

Hey there. I haven't read the previous chapter, so you might have answered some of my questions in the story already. First thing I'll say: you have a number of ...

I pride myself on my versatility: if there is a style or form out there, I can probably emulate it. Some of my works are planned, others are spontaneous, and ...

Hi there. I'll be reviewing you as thoroughly as I can. Confucianism placed their footprint on China during the times of the Qin dynasty, and along with it, this religion ...

I'm not quite sure if this is allowed, but this is my interpretation of the Korean song "In Yeon" by Lee Sun Hee ( you can listen to it here ...

Thanks, everyone, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Thanks everyone for the comments. @Mizzle - Everything except the wolves is hand-drawn digitally. No filters or effects. @silented1 - I'd love to, but I'm busy with life and my ...

Hi there! Long time, no review. I'm a bit behind on the chapters, but I'm glad you've kept writing this story; I really enjoy reading it. :D I caught a ...

As MeadowLark already mentioned, you punctuation needs work, especially your commas. You were missing a lot of commas, though I did see a couple extra ones and inappropriately used stops. ...

LittlePetRock already mentioned this, but you need paragraphs. Paragraphs make reading so much easier, and considering that a number of people, myself included, tend to review as they go, having ...