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Hi there. Before I mention anything else, it would be a good idea if you deleted your name from this. People can track you down with it. This isn't to ...

This was really cute. It did move a bit fast, but I think it suited this story. One thing I noticed was that while you italicized some of the thoughts, ...

Athiests can never seem to win a debate about religion, and some may put it into poetic terms: n either side can be proved nor disproved. The view that the ...

I don't have time at the moment to critique this fully, but I would like to point out that a lot of your arguments are flawed since they are based ...

Hi there. For the sake of brevity, I'll just be pointing out the issues I see. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. I believe in the ...

Inspired by the fact that a lot of fantasy stories have (often grossly unrealistic) hunting scenes in them. I wonder how many of those authors have actually gone hunting... I ...

Welcome to YWS. :D Though I may come across as mean in this review, I'm not trying to be; I'm actually trying to help you. In addition to what JSPike ...

Reach n’ grab! Capitalization is inconsistent. Elija Wood Well , s ure! Too many exclamation points. @_@ When you use as many exclamation points close together, they lose their impact ...

I like the changes. :D

I just had another idea for the Novels forum that would carry over from the Advanced Critiques: rather than copy-paste entire chapters into the post area, I think it would ...

Juni! :D So glad you liked. I am more of a novelist, but poetry is one of my first literary loves, and I enjoy writing it. It does wonders for ...

This made me giggle. XD (About almost all your life) As Snoink already mentioned, there is a huge difference between "you're" and "your". Even with a spelling/grammar checker, you'll have ...

You might want to delete your name; people can track you down with it. It snuck up behind me This line is redundant. I think the poem would be better ...

Hi Aqua. Can I has review? :D My piece Fate (An Interpretation into English) is feeling quite unloved in the Lyrics section.

Hey, Shina. When you have the time, could you review my Lyrics piece Fate (An Interpretation into English) ? Thanks.