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  • Information Desk Archive Re: Two possible minor changes to the header?

    I like the alphabetical order. It makes things easier for me to find. :D As far as the position of the header, rather than move it, why not change it ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Badges Review: Good or Bad?

    I think a nice feature to add to the badges system would be a review evaluation. At the end of every month or so, those blessed with forumly powers would ...

    Mar 30, 2010
  • Other Re: Siblings Deller

    First things first, you need to go back in and add paragraphs. One solid block of text is not easy to read, and most people will not even bother trying ...

    Mar 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Through the Darkness

    Here's the review you requested. Sorry I'm a little late. Since you are already aware of a lot of the words being unneeded, I'm not going to comment on that. ...

    Mar 8, 2010
  • Information Desk Re: How to Modify Your Blog

    The black header's dimensions are 980px x 106px. Anything as large or larger than that should work just fine.

    Mar 8, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Journeyman's Jewel

    The beginning (the first six paragraphs, actually) felt a bit choppy to me. The majority of those sentences are telling sentences, and while I don't normally mind this style of ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Sky

    Hey there. This is a fun little poem you have here, and I enjoyed reading it. :D I do think there's a fair amount of room for improvement, but this ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Last Days of Winter

    Ever since Event #5 , I've been itching to write a terzanelle. So I did, and here it is. The Last Days of Winter It is late in the season ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Prince and the Lost Sword

    As promised, here's a review. :D Well, Stella Thomas and WritingSpitfire were very thorough in pointing out the technical aspects, so I'll be focusing more on the content and how ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Romeo and Juliet a Twist in the Story

    Hello there. I warn you beforehand that I shall be quite nitpicky in this review. Please don't take it personally. :D My comments will be in dark blue . Juliet ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • General Articles Re: The Catechism: A short essay on the belief of God

    Hello there. Here's the review I promised you. Sorry it took so long. ^^; “I cannot imagine how the clockwork of the universe exist without the clockmaker” is a quote ...

    Feb 25, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: For a Reason

    Hello there. Here's a review as requested. :D The first thing I noticed is that your grammar is a bit off. Some sentences have extra words, some have missing, some ...

    Feb 23, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To My Love I Have Never Met (Villanelle)

    Is there an arranged marriage, or an online relationship, or... hmmm.... Arranged marriage. Forgive me if I'm wrong here, because I'm not wholly familiar with Villanelle rules, but in the ...

    Feb 18, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Losing the Talent to Write

    Another person chiming in to say this poem was great. I think we've all been there at some point (I know I have multiple times) and you really captured the ...

    Feb 17, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Comment Number One

    Rosie was quite thorough, and I agree with her for the most part. The first line could use rephrasing. I understand what you are saying, but the way you've used ...

    Feb 17, 2010


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