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  • Archive Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active

    Corda - Room A2 - 1:47 PM Great. Roommate. There goes that perfectly good story. She grabbed Sylvester and shoved him none-too-gently back into his pouch, drawing the mouth of ...

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Wounded Angel

    Tears of blood Ran down his face And stained his pure white cheeks Spurned from heaven Tossed to Earth His body starts to burn First impression: cliché imagery of the ...

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Some Minor (Though Noticeable) Changes

    Down at the bottom of the page where you copy-pasted your story, there's the Special Formatting option. If you want spacing and indents, you'll need to select Story .

    Apr 13, 2010
  • OOC Archive Re: Academy Redux! DT

    Symptoms of a pit viper's bite can be found here.

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Archive Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active

    Corda - Room A2 - 1:33 PM Once the boy had stopped flailing, Corda got off him and picked Sylvester up from the floor, cupping him in her hands and ...

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Archive Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active

    Corda - Dorm A2 - 1:10 PM Corda flushed, appalled that Sylvester had decided now of all nows to leave his pouch. She had told him to stay put, what ...

    Apr 13, 2010
  • Archive Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active

    Corda 1:06 PM Corda watched the handsome guy with the handsomer snake amble out of the cafeteria. He quite intrigued her, especially his ability to influence people so easily - ...

    Apr 12, 2010
  • OOC Archive Re: Academy Redux! DT

    My goodness you people posted a lot. XD So much reading to catch up on. @_@ This is what I get for being stuck in class all day. XP

    Apr 12, 2010
  • OOC Archive Re: Academy Redux! DT

    Name: Corda Gender: Female Age: 18 Ancestor(s): Veran from Legend of Zelda: Oracle of Seasons Home: Labrynna Alliance: Neutral with Evil leanings Appearance: Quite tall and slender with pale teal ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    Erm, that had nothing to do with what I was saying. Despite the new major heading and drop down menu for News, it remained as a tab beneath the Read/Write ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Traveler

    Bare feet upon sun-scorch ed seas What lies beyond each rock and tree That mark s the distance, The endless distance , Of the traveler ? A good tip when ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    There's still a News & Nonfiction tab under the Read/Write heading. Is that deliberate? Yes. How is YWS News different from the Non-fiction forum? The non-fiction forum is for critiquing. ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Beautiful Place: Short Short

    The entire thing struck me as quite choppy. There's no real transition between one paragraph to the next, or even between sentences. For example: The tree is more like a ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Celebrity Passion

    I think this is the saddest thing I've ever written. ._. --- Celebrity Passion Mindy didn’t particularly like Paul. He wasn’t polite or kindhearted, passionate, or even handsome. In fact, ...

    Apr 10, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: New Addition: YWS News is Here!

    But something is in the works to notify you not only when new comments are made to an article you wrote, but when any comment is made to any blog ...

    Apr 10, 2010


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