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I say go for it.

((Revive! Revive!)) Corda - Hallway - First Day of Class - 8:40 AM The day had barely begun, and already Corda was wishing she'd stayed in bed. She still wasn't ...

Just a little note that I'm busy studying for finals and all, so I probably won't be posting for a while.

Corda - Cafeteria - 7:32 PM "FOOD FIGHT!" What...?! was all Corda managed to think before Nolan jerked violently as Liam was zapped. Liam was out, but Nolan was still ...

Corda - Room B2, Cafeteria - 5:22 PM A gnawing discomfort in her stomach awoke Corda. With a sigh, she rolled over onto her belly and stretched, working out the ...

As the waves turned on the surface of the water, it reminded him of a breeze flowing through the wheat fields of his village. I like this comparison. There was ...

Thanks, everyone. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. :D

Corda - Anti-Villainy Counselling Classroom - 2:46 PM "And you, Corda - your ancestress - such power. One can hardly forget her. They deserve so much more than the infamy ...

And when they jeer and shout Just punch them out The second line is just so short, it sounds off, and it makes the rhyme sound forced, too. Overall, I ...

I liked how you used parentheses. They were a nice touch, though the periods inside them were unnecessary. Also, in the beginning, I'm not sure how the words in parentheses ...

searching for a lover to hunt and find. "Hunt and find" strikes me as a bit redundant. I would suggest cutting it down just to "find". The rhyme scheme struck ...

There were a lot of forced rhymes that, to be blunt, made these lyrics even cheesier than than the cliche phrases that make up this entire song. Basically, the impression ...

As I call my lover, the morning of today. This struck me as a forced rhyme, but the rest of the poem doesn't rhyme, so I'm left wondering if the ...

Hello there. It's me again. XD As with your other poem I reviewed, the punctuation is lacking and makes this poem difficult to understand on first read through. You also ...

Experimenting with a lack of capitalization and punctuation. I'm quite happy with the result. I only wish I could center this; it looks and reads much better. D: Nate is ...