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Been working on this on and off for a couple months. I would appreciate some feedback on what I have so far. All painted on one layer.

Ky, you do know that - as regards the parent forum, sub-forum suggestion - you can just go to the' Jump To' bar at the bottom of the screen and ...

If you joined YWS prior to August 2009, what do you find confusing and/or needlessly complicated about the new layout? Did the old YWS do anything better in making things ...

Corda - A Dorms - Tuesday - 3:00 AM Corda stood outside Room A2 hoping that either Nolan was (a) awake or (b) not a grumpy waker. She also hoped ...

Name: Ken. It's short for Kenhatkeltinmorvanhatetine, but even he has a hard time remembering how to say (much less spell) it. Age: Early 20s Gender: Male Species: Human. Really. Though ...

Stella has already covered most of what I wanted to say (especially concerning tenses and characterization), so I'll just be focusing on the pacing. The start of the chapter had ...

Lumi, your post confuses me. Mind giving a summary of what's going on? Because the continuity fix might just be as simple as changing the time stamp.

((Oh dear. Continuity. It weeps in agony. But it shall have to wait until later for repair as I need sleep.)) Corda - Dorm B Hallway - First Day of ...

Alrighty! Here's the first of the reviews I've promised you. Sorry it's taken so long. I have finals. >.> The first thing I notice is that your punctuation is less ...

So what did people think of the failed experiment scene, involving Arthur, Caroline and a explosion? I would like some kind of critique. Please. Personally, I felt it was a ...

Corda is now Level 1! She's had a minor increase in spellcasting ability. Corda - Room B1 - First Day of Class - 5:00 PM Public Relations had been canceled. ...

Sooo... the way I see it, Nolan and Corda went into Isaac's office first. They had their discussion with him, then they left and Bart went in, supposedly while they ...

Just commenting to say I love these, especially number 3. Numbers 4 and 7 are also much loved, and the first one is just plain awesome. These expensive colored pencils ...

Corda - Anti-Villainy Classroom - First Day of Class - 9:00 AM "Fine. I'll do what you want. But you have to leave Corda alone." Corda's jaw dropped. How dare ...

I think continuity has been broken. >.> Corda and Nolan aren't in the room when Bolt Bart visits Dawno, so they can't be just coming out of the office when ...