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Brutal honesty ahead: this poem made me go blah. It's a very cliche subject with very cliche imagery that was handled with cliche phrasing which was reused over and over ...

draw me a grave on the stained ground ; put me to rest without a doubt and leave me be. Nice, strong first stanza. The comma isn't grammatically correct, and ...

You proved me damn wrong! Lauren's already pointed out most of the other things I wanted to. This story was sweet, and it made me smile while I was reading ...

Ken Ken was lost. He didn't want to admit it, but he was completely clueless as to his current position. Who held job interviews in the middle of nowhere, anyway? ...

A minor little thing, but whenever I post a new topic, it somehow always has three views, even if I skip directly to the parent forum. I'm not sure if ...

Concerning your title, "proudness"? I don't believe that's a word. Also, "plays" is misspelled. Right from the first stanza, it seems to me that you forced yourself to rhyme. While ...

Every place on this earth overrun with violence. Personally, I would have broken the line at either "earth" or "overrun". I think it sounds and flows better. Blood flows , ...

Inspired by this poem . Hearts are like windmills and love like the wind with emotions the weather which constantly shifts as love sends a-flurry the heart like the wind ...

Thanks for your reviews on The Fox and the Prince. First thing: I'm wondering why you chose to right-align this poem. It's rather unusual, and I don't see a clear ...

I'm afraid I have to agree wholeheartedly with Maddy. There's nothing original or unique to this story. Now, while cliche isn't bad in and of itself, it must be paired ...

To put it bluntly, this chapter bored me. Why would they tell Zoe she had the power to bring about her father's downfall? Why would they tell her anything? Why ...

And here come the last three reviews! Better late than never? >.> I knew it for the past week, that there's something mystical about the voice in my head and ...

@Irish and Forest I used openCanvas 1.1. It's the old, free version of openCanvas, and while it's buggy and very simple, I love how easy it is to paint in ...

That monster is too darn cute for what it represents, and yet, it seems so fitting. XD As kind of an addition to Elinor's white room suggestion, maybe you could ...

Corda - Room B1 - Tuesday - 9:00 AM Corda was sleeping in. She had no classes today, and since she hadn't gone to sleep until well past three in ...