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There were a number of spelling and punctuation mistakes in this. I suggest you go back through and proofread more closely. With punctuation, it's sometimes helpful to rewrite the poem ...

Hello, there. You might want to get around to reviewing other members' works. It'll not only get you more reviews in turn, but it's good practice for your own writing. ...

I agree with KAH; this poem ended on a very strong note, which was great. However, I did have to force myself to read this poem through. Part of this ...

fade away with tomorrow Watch your spelling. Because of this, I'm not sure if you meant "morning" rather than "mourning". Judging from the meaning of the poem, "mourning" seems to ...

Hey there. As Snoink already mentioned, you need to be a little more careful with your meter. Right now, the syllables of each rhyming line don't match up, and so ...

I really like the idea behind this poem, and I mean really, truly like it. The title is what caught my eye in the list of new literary works. I ...

A feature that would be nice is if we could link to a certain page in the options. For example, in the Jabberwock IS, the tighten shoe rags page options ...

That was hilarious and really well done. It's been ages since I've read "A Tale of Two Cities", and now you've got me wanting to read it right now. XD ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS. You may want to get around to reviewing other users' works. This will get you more reviews and the points you need to post more ...

You have some interesting and unique imagery here, which is great. Unfortunately, you have so much of it at once that it all melds together into a mess of imagery, ...

This poem was truly lovely, and your imagery, though simple and familiar, was strong and not cliche. I really enjoyed it. There were two things that stood out to me: ...

Thank you all for your wonderful reviews! I'm experimenting with a very different style than my normal one, so all your feedback is really appreciated. :D @Earthfire Thanks for pointing ...

If it isn't too much to ask, would you mind reviewing what I have posted of my novel The Fox and the Prince? If that's too much, a review on ...

Would you please review Chapter 3 of The Fox and the Prince? There's nothing in particular I'd like you to focus on, so critique away.

Would you please review Chapter 3 of The Fox and the Prince for me?