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It's hard to say because the gaps in your summary make seeing how it all fits together really difficult. If you want a more solid opinion, providing the information that ...

There's also no rule saying you can't work on both of them at the same time. You know, if you really can't choose between them.

Re: Ishiguro The setting of his earlier novels was not a factor in my asserting that his themes are quite Japanese in nature. It's hard for me to pin down ...

I think it's a really interesting idea, and I'd be curious to see how you pull it off. Then again, I really like frame stories, and One Thousand and One ...

I would recommend just chugging through the first draft so that you have at least one completed draft. Things like word choice and tenses are what are called line-edits, and ...

@Sweater How would you explain writers like Kazuo Ishiguro who’s as English as Ian McEwan or Martin Amis and the only thing Asian about him is his face and his ...

Is there something in particular about writing it that's giving you trouble?

And now that begs the questions of how are you using "evil", and how do you think society makes people such? Also, what do you mean by society?

I have a Casio FX-300ES that's lasted me all the way from middle school through college-level calculus. It's pretty much invincible, though I have currently misplaced it. I had a ...

Moved this to The Lounge where it will probably get more attention. In my opinion though, how many works you should review depends entirely on how many works you are ...

Bioluminescence doesn't require an independent light source and is chemically-generated by a number of organisms. One of the most well-studied is the angler fish, which uses bioluminescence to lure pr

That depends on what you mean by "complex". There are a lot of species of fish and invertebrates which live in deep cave systems without any light exposure, and they ...

Well, the good news is that it's not true that nothing grows without light. There are multiple species that live and grow in deep cave systems where light never reaches, ...

So there's a few major issues I see with what you've presented so far: 1) How do Caroline and Trey know that Marissa is Charles's daughter? It seems like you ...

I don't believe you understand what languages purpose really is; it enables people to express concepts, ideas and thinking. You are trying to make it define the criteria of evil ...