Kale

For being generally nice and awesome? For stealing vowels (and deleting posts; DEM!)

I’m not in the mood to mention to her my encounter Murtagh or my thoughts about it. This sentence doesn't make sense. I believe you're missing a "with" after "encounter". ...

The first photo is my favorite. I really like the slightly bluish tint everything has, especially the metal bars; it's lovely. I also like how stark the bars are against ...

Poor Mochi in Dramatic Poetry has been stuck with just one review for almost a week. If you would be so kind as to put an end to it since ...

Poor Conrad. His piece has been stuck with just 1 review for so long.

SilverSharpie, I can't see your signature. If you could just copy-past the URL of your piece into a post, it'll automatically make a link for you.

Hello there. The first thing I noticed was that this isn't quite a sestina. Correct me if I'm mistaken, but I was under the impression that the words repeated at ...

with only memories left behind you’ll ride along the milky way Milky Way should be capitalized since it's a named location, like a country or a city. and only stars ...

I agree with Jasmine Hart -- this poem felt disjointed and the repetition was more boring than anything. The periods at the end of every line had a lot to ...

I lit five candles that stretched in a full 360 degrees around me and crossed my legs in the meditating posture This sentence just read awkwardly to me. I think ...

This was an interesting story, and as short as it was, I enjoyed it. I especially liked how you incorporated the magic -- it was obvious that it was unusual ...

I think I may have reported this before, but reviews made in Other do not add to the review count. Points, however, are still granted. I want my review(s), Nate. ...

Have you ever been in a car and looked out the window, everything outside is a blur and you can’t really focus on one thing and yet the colours washing ...

Car keys and other items lay scattered around. Instructions stuck on the fridge. Tense shift. The rest of the story is in present tense, so it should be "lie". Also, ...

Stylistically, I think you rely too much on adjectives and adverbs. Instead, if you used stronger, more precise words, your writing would be stronger. You also tend to use less ...