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Corda - Spellcasting - Friday - 8:59AM Corda was slightly out of breath when she arrived at the open door of the classroom, her skirts tangled and her hair mussed. ...

I was going through my writing folder when I came across these older poems. I still like them, so I figured I might as well post them up for review ...

The golden elixir has spilled for only you. These lines are pretty and all, but what is the golden elixir, and why is it significant? You mention it once and ...

@GenShawklan I have no idea how you found this as the thread is more than a year old, but in the future, please look at the date of the first ...

Compared to the weather lately, that was warm. "Lately" should only be used when writing in the present. As you're writing about past events, "Compared to the recent weather" makes ...

Hello there. You look pretty new, so might I suggest that you get around to reviewing other members' writing. Doing so will not only get you more reviews in turn, ...

I wouldn't want to miss it for nothing You've got a double negative here, so it basically means that you'd gladly miss whatever it is. If that was your intention, ...

Out of all the Egyptian goddesses, Bast has always been my favorite (closely followed by/tied with Sekhmet). The first thing I noticed was this was very rough, the tree, especially. ...

Heya, Jen. I saw this a while ago and could have sworn I commented, but apparently not. So here I am to fix that. The first thing I noticed was ...

Thanks for the comments/review. Now, my next issue, the Captain name, also needlessly complicated even in Science Fiction names tend to be pronouceable but here you are unsure of how ...

Corda - Dorm B - Friday - 8:47 PM "Welcome back." The door behind her opened, and Corda whipped around to glare at the redhead who had just stepped into ...

I may find it filled with joy Before you post your writing anywhere public, it's always a good idea to go through your work again and check it for mistakes. ...

they threw their bodies in a dirt-like trench, You really need to be more careful with your spelling. Three spelling mistakes in a single line does not leave a good ...

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