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  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    No question! If you had to pick between a spoon or a spork, which would you choose and why?

    Jun 13, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: a time to be so small

    Allow me to profess my undying love and devotion to you, my darling Jagged. I happily accept any and all blame related to this poem. My only suggestion for this ...

    Jun 13, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Life Beyond Borders Of Man

    Hello there, and welcome to YWS. I see you haven't reviewed anyone yet, so I suggest you get around to doing so soon. It will not only get you more ...

    Jun 12, 2010
  • Other Re: The Death of Rai Thames

    Honestly, I'm not sure what to make of this, or what you wanted feedback on. For one, it's so short, and, for another, since it's the end of the novel, ...

    Jun 12, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Rain

    This was interesting. At first, I wasn't sure I'd like the repetition of the patterpitterpatter, but it worked for this. You also had some great imagery going here, comparing the ...

    Jun 12, 2010
  • Archive Re: Avatar: the other last air bender.

    Chen - Ba Sing Se Palace - King's Court Chen was most displeased. He had actually taken the effort to tie his hair up properly and dress immaculately, only for ...

    Jun 12, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Himalayan Pomegranates

    I'm here to critique, as promised! *salutes* And the first thing I notice is that my user title is as apt as ever. XD Himalayan Pomegranates This title made me ...

    Jun 10, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Giant poetry assignment

    Clarity Pyramid - Struck me as very vague, non-specific, and uninteresting. Etheree - You're missing a period after "for" which really tripped me up. Also, this struck me as too ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: The Blue Sword

    I remember reading this years ago and enjoying it. It's not the best book out there, but it had its moments, and it kept me entertained to the end. *adds ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Part 2 of fighting gods,saving lives and abit of.....

    ermmm, hi did you read my first part? Yes, and everything I said still applies. I just didn't review the first part because you've already got a number of excellent ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Part 2 of fighting gods,saving lives and abit of.....

    Hello there! I saw that you posted in chat, and I decided to give you a review. Since you're fairly new, I'm not sure if you're aware that you should ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Archive Re: Avatar: the other last air bender.

    I am working on a profile. And searching for a wiki. Here's hoping I, in all my ignorant glory, do not botch things up. @_@ Still working on the profile. ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Stone Heart

    There were teardrops in my eyes Watch your spelling. Ya, I missed you, too This line came out of nowhere. I think it would work better if you had a ...

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Archive Re: Just an Idea

    Count me interested.

    Jun 3, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Old Poem Dump I

    Thanks, you two, for the lovely reviews. :D @Jagged Assassin and Silver... were written to get a quick laugh from, hence the odd wording and lack of point. I'll see ...

    Jun 3, 2010


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