Kale

Hey there, Jared. I'm afraid I'll have to agree with x3CoFx3; this song was full of cliches, which made it boring. Using some cliches are fine, but this entire song ...

The first thing I noticed was the lack of punctuation, and the formatting tags. Right after, I noticed that you had a lot of misspelled/misused words, especially you're/your and "gunner" ...

For a long time, YWS' stylesheet was devilishly unorganized. That is a gross understatement, and you know it. ._. But, yes, I love how there's a link to Notifications all ...

chatglitch.JPG Sorry for the size, but there's a couple of issues. First is that the PM notice has pushed chat down. The second is the ad. >.> I remember there ...

For not visiting Chat as frequently as she should. :P

Finalized Descriptions This will be the list of descriptions that have been finalized. I'm putting it in a separate post to make things easier to keep track of.

A while ago, I proposed in the Information Desk that the All Forums page be modified to include subforums. Since then, a lot of new features and corners of the ...

Hello there. I haven't read the prologue, so if anything I point out was already covered in the prologue, feel free to disregard it. Rosey Unicorn does bring up a ...

Our beloved and beflowered Rosey Unicorn was quite thorough in her critique, which doesn't leave me much to add since she has already covered practically everything I was planning to ...

This is a really good and interesting idea, but I think it could have been executed better. In the beginning, I felt it rambled and could be much more condensed. ...

that I thought that, as once poetically said Claire, " Your jeans were as blue as the sky in October. " The punctuation in repeated lines can (and in this ...

I haven't read the earlier parts, but it's always sad to see works with just one review, so review, I shall! And if I point something out that makes sense ...

I haven't read the other parts, so if I point out something that makes sense in the context of the novel, don't mind me. XD He made his way up ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS. I see you've only made this one post, so I suggest that you go out and review other people's writing and maybe introduce yourself ...

Moldy (Curse you, Bolt!)