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And I'm unstickying because who reads stickies?

I'm actually glad this feed is simpler than Facebook. Organized by time is organized enough for me (and I have a soft spot for things that are chronologically organized).

Issue with the Storybook section of the notifications system. notificationsglitch.jpg It was only one post in each. All my surprise and hope for nothing. *faux emoness*

That's the program I used to learn how to touch type. It's got a keyboard on-screen and overlaid hands that show you which finger should be pressing the correct key ...

A hole will soon be in your chest, And your world, a mess. The rest of this poem doesn't rhyme, so this approximate rhyme comes out of nowhere. The last ...

The first question I feel compelled to ask is: do you, or do you not, have a rhyme scheme? I'm guessing no, so I suggest that you rewrite the lines ...

To be absolutely honest, this poem made me yawn and roll my eyes. It read to me as typical teen wangst, especially the part about sleeping pills. It also didn't ...

Hey there, Last. As I mentioned in chat earlier, "schone" should be spelled "schöne". Jagged actually covered most of what I wanted to say though there are still a couple ...

Hey there. Overall, this flowed well, but there were a couple of lines here and there that were a touch too long or short that disrupted the flow. One of ...

In your overstuffed chair. "Overstuffed" is a single word. The "Today is one of those days" got very irritating, very quickly. Aside from being repetitive, there really isn't much space ...

"Falunting" should be "flaunting". I think the punctuation, especially in the first and fourth stanzas, could use some tweaking. Right now, they read very choppily because of all the periods, ...

The first thing I noticed was the incorrect punctuation. You a missing a comma after "recession" and there should be a period after "beating". Because the punctuation is incorrect, the ...

O Suz, I would be most humbled if you could rip apart this poem which I wrote for Rosey's contest.

Hello Dems. Mind reviewing this poem for me? It's for Rosey's contest, so be as harsh as possible. :P

Anything and everything you spy, but comments especially on the hyphenation would be appreciated.