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It's hard to say with how little we know about your story, but since you're not planning on a sequel, I'd recommend making the defeat decisive, so that it's clear ...

In books with multiple viewpoint characters, I've seen chapters titled with just the name of the viewpoint character. I've also seen simple numbers, relevant illustrations, or no titles at all.

It can be apocalyptic if it's widespread enough. Some diseases have a long incubation period, so a lot of people can become infected without anyone being wiser. And if the ...

I'm ambi, though I prefer to do things with one hand over the other depending on the task. I shoot almost exclusively left-handed (because I'm also left-eye dominant), for example, ...

Is it possible to add back the option to close the chatbar entirely?

If you'd like to see a humorous example of an ode, there's this:

Pretzels are okay (especially when flavored with dill and ranch), but I love my meat snacks.

Added two more issues: shorter/general vs. longer/thorough reviews, and reviewing templates/guidelines.

Want to learn how to write better reviews? Have some questions about reviewing in general? Just want a quick refresher on reviewing? Well, here's the article for you. So, what ...

I'm wondering how many of the people who have commented on this thread have read the linked-to articles in the first post.

Unsounded immediately comes to mind. Sette's character arc seems to be headed towards this while Jivi and Matty's situations match up pretty well. Captain Toma's arc seems to be headed ...

I used to play NationStates, it was my obsession before I joined YWS. My nation is Sovereign Republic of Arcadia (yeah, I'm Ithaca here, Arcadia there.) Initially I was an ...

What strikes me the most about your introduction is how informal it is. Depending on the kind of essay you're writing, that could be a good or bad thing, but ...

My main point was you don't mention how having been blind affects her emotionally after she gets her vision back, and not having her be affected by it afterwards aside ...

You've probably gotten waaay more feedback on this idea than you ever wanted, but I'm still dropping in my two cents. The thing I think is the biggest issue with ...