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The rhyme in this felt obviously forced. I could tell that you used words for just for the sake of rhyming them, jamming in other words in the lines to ...

Kyousuke was pretty thorough with the grammar, so I won't mention anything on it. The one thing I noticed reading this story was that you used a lot of passive ...

Hello there. The first thing I'd like to say is that it would be helpful to include the prompt or, if there was no prompt, what your main goal was ...

For the descriptions, I think it would be easy to copy and paste the forum description. But what about those areas without descriptions? Like the News section? And then I ...

Most simply, an anti-hero is a character that has heroic goals or results, but uses less-than-heroic means to achieve them. For example, where a true hero would likely let a ...

Pray Perpetuate Poetry Punctuation or Why Poetry Should Be Grammatically Correct Poetry: such an expressive, free form, unbound by the rules of mundane grammar, right? The poet can alter the ...

Suz, I humbly request a re-review of this poem . I believe I have made it much more concrete. :3

Nate, I just tested the comment deletion on my wall, and unless you just added the trigger, deleting a comment does subtract from the reply count.

I wondered where those went. xD Need help? You need to ask? XD

Knightley, that's because they haven't appeared yet. It can take up to half an hour for a reply to a comment to appear.

Not quite finished. XD I'm still working on the descriptions half.

Rather than a blog, a usergroup or a thread with links would work better as there's no feature for users to post entries on another user's blog. Also, what is ...

My name. It is so visible and there at the top of the page. *flails* But Nate! You forgot to add in the links for My Profile and My Feed ...

The paint-chipped reminisce, This line made no sense. Did you mean "paint chips" instead? The rhyme in this came suddenly with scars/stars. This is because rhyme before it of concrete/meet ...

Mi-len, to rhyme with Ellen.