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Re: Need help finding information!
Have you tried your local library or community college? They should have books on the subject, and if they don't, they can easily get a hold of them. Most libraries ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Flight Of The Griffin
The brown of the wing traverse the blue sky, But no one can see as our Griffin flies by. There are two issues with these lines, and the first is ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Writing a cover letter for flash fiction/short stories
If you really have nothing to say, then simply thank the editor for taking the time to read and consider your story.
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Writing a cover letter for flash fiction/short stories
Oftentimes, you don't need to include a cover letter. The main purpose of a cover letter is to establish your credence. If you've been published elsewhere/been involved in a respected ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Lemonade for Breakfast (children's storybook)
This was really sweet, but not so sweet it was that sickly saccharine of trying too hard to be sweet. Now, there are definite issues with this, but I still ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Do you remember your first story that you wrote?
My first story was called Kitchen Escape. I wrote it when I was five. It was about how all these fruits and vegetables decided they'd had enough of being eaten, ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Plug/Find YWS Pages
Spoons came before sporks, and are therefore more enduring. :P
Jul 16, 2010 -
Re: Kissing scene tips, please?
Some questions first. Why are they kissing? Is it because they like each other romantically? Is it because of a dare? Are they just kissing out of curiosity? Is there ...
Jul 16, 2010 -
Re: Music while you write?
I write best in silence. I do enjoy listening to music when I'm revising, though. I'll usually put a song that matches the mood of the scene on loop until ...
Jul 16, 2010 -
Re: The Perfect Voyage ~ Starting
Zane Thomas How horrible! How terrible! A murder on the ship, and a high-profile one, at that! How depressing! How appalling! Now all the cruise-goers would be depressed and tense ...
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: Sibling Rivalry
Garis The assassin cursed his luck, timing, and lack of stature as the furiously drunken Sandor trapped him in the corner and began raining down blows. The larger man wasn't ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: The YWS Cliques
You can substitute the soul payment to Nate for other more... tangible things. Like Site Maps. :P
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Sibling Rivalry
Garis "Derrick isn't dead." A blank look from Sandor. The older man looked down at his cup, full again, then back up at the assassin. "Come again?" "Derrick isn't dead," ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: The Wise Words Of Johnny C
Hello Bulletproof. I will be reviewing you today, so if blunt and brutal honesty is not your cup of tea, or if you're attached to this poem, I suggest you ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Sibling Rivalry
Garis Well, this complicated things a little. The assassin hadn't expected lovely Rosalie to be around Sandor when he came calling for his commander. She might recognize him, even with ...
Jul 10, 2010
