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Re: tinnitus
audio feedback -- cicada chorus pierced by cricket interludes fades into screeching -- a muted stereo track, decayed frequency, silence.
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Sibling Rivalry
Garis The assassin was lying on his bed, limp and occasionally whimpering, and feeling quite sorry for himself as he tried to calm down. He heard the door creak open ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: The Plot Game
The two owners are feuding due to a date gone horribly awry back when they were both attending the university, which the residents still talk about.
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: The Moon's Jealous Revenge
Some grammar nitpicks first: Killing the sun and stopping the glow, I think a colon or m-dash would work better than a comma here. Venus and Mars cannot intervene, Minor ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: The Plot Game
The university is in a desert because the lake dried up.
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: What literary agents can't stand
I found the piece written for Writer's Digest that was mentioned in the introduction to the article: What Agents Hate . It's much of the same as what's posted on ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Writing to music....!
Not everyone can listen to music and write, though. I for one find music distracting and find myself often just sitting there and listening to the song instead of writing. ...
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: Sibling Rivalry
Garis "Hm..." the old man hummed to himself as he examined Garis' open mouth. "Mhm..." "What?" Garis tried to ask, though it came out as more of a "Uhugkt?" siince ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Plants and sun and science.
It sounds interesting to me, though I think the twist ending might be a bit tricky to pull off without making it look like a badly done deus ex machina. ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Should I edit or just rewrite the whole thing?
I'm in the exact same boat as you, actually, and I have to say that Rosey's advice is what has worked best for me. My current novel project is not ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: I Need Help
I think you really have to ask yourself the question "Why do I write?" and answer it honestly. Right now, just from reading the above post, I get the feeling ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Important Changes! Pay to Post! [Must Read]
Seemingly, I thought it already was implemented there? I see it when I review short stories and the like, and it even appears in the poetry forums. In any case, ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: fire and ice
There is one burning question in my mind, and that is: what is that? There's really not much to the drawing, and if it wasn't for the title, I'd have ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Vacation in northern Michigan
Hey there. Nice pictures, and I especially like the one of Arch Rock, though the first one was pretty cute. Something I noticed, though, was that you seemed to have ...
Aug 1, 2010 -
Re: Helpful Hints
There are also programs like yWriter that exist specifically to help writers organize everything related to their story. I suggest looking around a little to find one that you like ...
Aug 1, 2010
