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ultraviolet was quite thorough in her corrections and suggestions. Since she was so thorough, I'll just point out the little things that caught my eye. In the first stanza, you ...

Novels do have to be consistent and coherent, but that's what the second (and beyond) draft is for. :P

INTP/INTJ I've taken that test/variations of several times (since my old college likes running sociology studies) and I've got a 50/50 split between the two types. I like to think ...

Fanfiction cannot be published. Even if you have an entirely original cast of characters, if the story takes place in a universe/world created by someone else, then it is considered ...

And crows fled to the Otherworld , carrying spirits on their back. These were my favorite lines. You might want to go through this again and make sure everything is ...

This poem bored me, and I started skimming around the fourth line. It's basically "I do this. I do that. I do this that. I do that that." Not very ...

For #1, I distributed the x on the left to get x^2 + ax - 10. Factoring that gets you the sets (x + 5)(x - 2) and (x + ...

The typo demons are a-prowling as the writers begin their howling at every foiled attempt to write without mistakes, so they smite down characters left and right. Soon the writers ...

Garis The injured assassin cracked open an eye at the sound of his name and surreptitiously looked to the door. It really was Sandor, thank the heavens! The old man ...

Vivian/Viviane is also sometimes called Nimue. The legends are old, and they've been adapted many times, so there's a lot of variation in names/spellings. Just so you know.

Reserving a spot for one of the townsfolk. Will try and finish profile by tonight. >.> Name: Learana (Rana) Rothin Character picture: (none) Character quote: "If you would just hold ...

Arthurian legends are a pretty specific type of myth. They focus only on King Arthur and the members of his court. Gawain and the Green Knight is my personal favorite, ...

You only want the solutions where y = 1. I assume by equation(s), they want f(x) = -x - 1 and f(x) = x + 3.

Hi there. As promised, a review. I may come across as a bit harsh, but I really am trying to help. :D First things first, I feel I have to ...

Garis He was going to die. That was the only thought running through Garis' head as the other assassin pressed her hand over his mouth to muffle his cries. He ...