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Re: Looking for dedicated followers for your novel?
Tired of having chapters lurking at the back of Works with 0/1 Reviews? Wish you could find some dedicated followers for your long-term writing projects? Look no further! At Buddy ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: A Rebellious Stage
Goodness that was long! Next time you might want to break up your story into parts so that they're far less intimidating to read. Keeping it in between 1000-2000 words ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: Kneel
because in darkness the stars are bright, because in darkness and we see what is not, The repetition is redundant and so is completely unnecessary. It's like saying "kill something ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: Will Dream
Here is the shredding I promised you. :3 Unfortunately, there's not much to shred because there's not much substance to be shredded. This poem gives the impression of being deep ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Odd little bug-thing, but when I'm using Firefox, every page I view lags horribly when I go to scroll with scrollwheel, touchpad, or keyboard. There's also a half-inch stretch on ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Vysehrad Numba 2
Picture 1 - As Mizzle already pointed out, the angle is off. It's tilted a touch too far to the left, which gives the picture an off-kilter feeling. You should ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Isle of Rain (Eidolon's Chains redux)
((I'm afraid I'll have to drop out. The course load for the new semester is heavier than I was expecting. @_@))
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Beatrix Potter drawings.
Hey there, Amy. Consider yourself the fortunate victim of my first Art and Photography review in a while. :P One thing I notice in common between the two is how ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Neserada's Cause *started and accepting!*
Tigad The king sat at his desk, looking over reports of Tathiel and Ceria's movements and the spring cleaning inventory. Currently the Neseradian General was keeping to himself in his ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: All the World's a Sage: Character creation Help
Moved to Writing Tips. Writing Activities is more for word games and such. Writing Tips is for where you have advice or a technique you think might help other writers. ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Some Changes to General Discussion
I signed up, but I could never connect. Always got an error with something like "This Wave Does Not Exist". But I didn't have time for it anyway, so... *pokes ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: This is of immense importance!
Don't be ridiculous. The red is the blood and fiery passion barely contained within the delectable confines of a small jelly body. Those oranges have been tinted a sickly yellow, ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Match Maker
Bolt x Nate. We all know Bolt is a favorite target of Nate when he plays around with the censors. And Bolt obviously enjoys the attention. How has no one ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Sibling Rivalry
Garis "You need to exercise," Ilgard had told him, and Garis had been all too happy to agree (not too happy though, as that would have been suspicious). "Nothing too ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Process of Clarity
Hello. Me again. :P The first thing I noticed was the punctuation. Or, more accurately, the lack of it being properly used. While poetry is a bit more flexible with ...
Aug 29, 2010
