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How would they deal with surface-to-air missiles/other forms of attack? Also, you use "congregation". The word has religious connotations. Was that intentional, and if so, mind explaining the mindset(

The Fool Motley describes your very mien, your ragtag cloak a lesson in history, a library of your wanderings through the world and its secrets. You roam freely, without care, ...

Hello there, gizmo59, and welcome to YWS. The first thing I would like to say concerns your formatting. Right now, all your paragraphs are lumped together into one mass of ...

Seventeen have been written. Maybe one more, then I shall call it a day.

Yes. You have complete control over and retain all rights to whatever you post on this site, and should you ever want to remove your work, you can delete it ...

What the title says. In the spirit of Reviewing Sunday, here is a list of poems and lyrics with only one review that are no longer in the Recent Additions ...

Hello there mkayd25. I could have sworn I reviewed this earlier. Apparently not. So here I am to fix that. Next time you post something and want reviews, you might ...

It was one of the many portals back to the Other World, my true Home. How does Artem know this? A bit of explanation, even if it is just that ...

You've already had a number of excellent reviews on this, so that makes things both easier and more difficult for me to review. XD Concerning the more formal tone, I ...

Where will the superhumans go?

Hello again. You might want to link to the first part at the top of the post. That way, it will be the first thing that your readers will see. ...

Hello there, PadrePio. I am happy to report that this story of yours caught and held my interest. There are a couple of issues that do need pointing out, though. ...

The American Dream has always been the goal of Americans, maybe not from the beginning, but it has always been there. This sentence contradicts itself. You're saying the dream has ...

Four score , and seven years ago, Watch your spelling. I disliked the use of "data" and "helix-like". They struck me as a bit out-of-place. Also, I believe "two-pricked" should ...

Alrighty, Aiden. Prepare yourself for a critique. First things I noticed: grammar and spelling. Poetry generally follows the same conventions of grammar and spelling as regular writing; it is these ...