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I am only getting the usual 50 points max per review instead of the doubled 100. This makes me sad. Especially since this happened to me last Review Day too. ...

Alrighty then. First things first: as popatemyheart1994 already pointed out, you have a lot of spelling mistakes. Coupled with the spacing (which I will cover in a bit more depth ...

And incandescent, Luminescent, Did you mean "incandescent luminescence" or "incandescence, luminescence"? Of the threnody Tied tight around my heart. "Of the funeral song tied tight around my heart."

Six down. Planning four more tonight. May do more. Depends on how late Skype chatting keeps me up. As for tomorrow, we shall see.

Waiting to envelop me once more. "Envelope" with the "e" is the thing you put letters into. Meanwhile, lonely "envelop" without the "e" is always looking for someone/something to enclose ...

Harshness ahead. You have been warned. So. You have a rhyming poem here, but the first line does not rhyme with anything. Care to explain why? And then you have ...

Jerome and I were walking hand -in- hand This is a mistake you have recurring throughout the poem, and it really distracted me. I highly suggest you fix it. The ...

Hello, dasiamari. I'll be reviewing you today on this lovely Review Day. This poem was very short. Now, normally I really like short poems (because they're so short), but this ...

Hello there, Crystalkitten, and welcome to YWS. You might want to get around to reviewing other members' stories and/or poems. It will get you the points you need to post ...

Patience, O Flowery One. Review Day comes once a month to rescue all from being review-less. :P have a moment to look at another "The" just sounds wrong and makes ...

I actually wrote an article on the subject a while back. Or at least, a somewhat related article. In any case, you can read it here . Personally, I think ...

Maybe it is the Doctor himself! He must have become a woman! :shock: Not for the first time, iirc.

Loving the alphabetization, Jagg. :P American: 9 Asian: 1 Canadian: 1 English: 3 Filipino: 1 Finnish: 1 French: 1 Indian: 1 Irish: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: ...

Second person is tricky. On the one hand, you get the advantage of directly addressing the reader, which makes them immediately involved with the story. On the other hand, if ...

Ah, don't you just love it when they require you to show your work? I feel your pain, my dear, and so here I am to help! The quadratic equation ...