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Re: The Women Detectives chapter 1
Fantasy was quite thorough, and I really don't have much to add. I do wonder why you decided to post this story now, and what you plan on doing with ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: For the Love of Fashion Chapter 3
Hello there. I'll be your reviewer this lovely Review Day. That said, I haven't read the previous chapters. If I bring up a point that was addressed in an earlier ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Bob Witherspoon
First things first, it is spelled "Claus" without the "e". For a moment there, I thought you were talking about the movie "The Santa Clause". Secondly, you ramble a fair ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Entities Amalgamated in Force of Being.
Existance, Watch your spelling. Existence is spelled with an "e". Overall, there were two main issues with this piece. The first is the vagueness. The second is that you have ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Existence of God
I hope this isn't taken as a cowardly flight from defending my argument. Not at all. I too have a strong distaste for organized religion and its doctrine, however I ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Troughs and Peaks
You sit on the beach in the sand, your pants rolled up to your knees and barefoot. You really need to rework this sentence. As-is, it reads as if the ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Sparsile
It was so nightmarish - Sparsile - I agree with Last about the title drop. While I do like the play on the meanings of the word, and having it ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011
How to pass and how many can be passed? O_O I wanna pass an artwork, but I'd also want to pass poetry. which to pick? LOL You can submit one ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Existence of God
Does the child not have the right to live with decency and an equal footing in education? You can't just say "it's their business", you have to do something to ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: The Aenied
What particularly do you not understand? The language? The premise? The significance of some of the events? It might be a good idea if you told us what you do ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Octopus
*Seriously, I think I would have preferred if you'd said you'd slaved over it for like 4 hours....-_- Too bad. I didn't. Speed comes with practice. I'd like to know ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Octopus
Glad you all like this. :D @Knightley All will succumb to the cuteness! Mwahahahaha!!! And I drew it in about fourty minutes. :P It was just a matter of starting ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
I've done two reviews, one today and one last night, and while my review count goes up, I'm not getting any points. These are the reviews: Browsers used: Firefox and ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011
I love leaf fluff. It is just amazing, and definitely think that's the one you should submit. The others are nice, but out of all of them, leaf fluff is ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Octopus
Last night, I felt like drawing something cute. And how much cuter can you get than a pink octopus examining some seaweed?
Nov 23, 2010
