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  • Writing Tips Re: Interjections!

    Firstly, the ! is not called an interjection. It's called an exclamation mark, exclamation point, or a bang. Exclamation points indicate exclamatory sentences, and sometimes interjections. Before you

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: What should we call the Wall?

    also is there anyway to get "notifications" as you do on facebook, because I never know when someone posts a comment.. Just check your Notifications every once in a while. ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: What should we call the Wall?

    Ledger? "X has scrawled in your Ledger." Though that sounds a touch ominous. Though I like ominous. Leaf? That could go with the scribble idea since it's a synonym for ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Day November 2010 Check-In

    15, with 12 of them novel chapters. I am satisfied. :3

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Untitled - part 5

    Hello there. I will be reviewing you this lovely Review Day. :D That said, I haven't read the previous chapters, so if I bring up a point that was addressed ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Foretold (Chapter 6)

    Hello there. I will be reviewing you this lovely Review Day. :D That said, I haven't read the previous chapters, so if I bring up a point that was addressed ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Prism Review: Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows - Part 1

    You did a pretty good job on the introductory summary. It's concise and yet intriguing, though you have a case of homophone confusion and some awkward wording that could use ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: A Black Canvas - Chapter Two

    This chapter moved far too fast, and there are crucial details missing. They were running, but then they had time to stop to treat the narrator's wound? Since when? At ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Icefire - part 11 (Final Chapter)

    Rejoice for it is Review Day, and here I am to do some reviewing. With that said, I haven't read the previous chapters, so if I bring up a point ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Sand That Falls, Chapter 2

    Hello there. I will be reviewing you this lovely Review Day. That said, I haven't read the previous chapter, so if I bring up a point that was addressed in ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Lost&Found: Chapter 10: Reiners Confession

    Hello there. I will be reviewing you this lovely Review Day. :D That said, I haven't read the previous chapters, so if I bring up a point that was addressed ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: A Black Canvas

    There were a number of misspelled words scattered throughout. Proofreading more carefully in the future should take care of the spelling errors. In addition, you had massive paragraphs that could ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Safe-Chapter 2

    Hello there. I will be reviewing you this lovely Review Day. That said, I haven't read the previous chapter, so if I bring up a point that was addressed in ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Elle (Chapter 14 + 15)

    Hello there. I will be reviewing you this lovely Review Day. :D That said, I haven't read the previous chapters, so if I bring up a point that was addressed ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: the way of the jungle chapter six

    Hello there. I will be reviewing you this lovely Review Day. :D That said, I haven't read the previous chapters, so if I bring up a point that was addressed ...

    Nov 28, 2010


Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
— Bernard Malamud