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Depends on your writing style. In my case, for the first draft I'm almost entirely spontaneous. I'll have a basic concept, some characters, or a world when I'm starting out, ...

Here I am to review as requested. The one thing I noticed about this chapter was all the redundancies. Part of it has to do with the infodumps, and part ...

Well, it all hinges upon the definition of "natural". If you define "natural" as occurring in nature, and if you define "nature" as the observable universe, then it is purely ...

I find it a bit ironic that you're telling people to leave religion out of the debate when religion, or its lack, is so much a part of their lifestyle. ...

Also, if you have any questions or want some reviewing tips, you can always PM someone with a green name at any time. We'll be happy to answer your questions ...

I have only one thing to say about the chess example: you don't always have to win to avoid losing. There's this lovely thing called a "draw" that I abuse ...

I am sad that I'd've did not make an appearance in this.

Peoplewatch. Anywhere public is good, but schools, malls, and playgrounds in particular are great because you can see how people interact with others within and outside of their peer groups. ...

Hello there Elo and brother. I shall be reviewing you today. If something comes across as a bit harsh, know that it's not because I dislike you; rather, I'm trying ...

What you know is not limited to just first-hand experiences.

It depends on the story, but for the most part, I'm a paper person. I hail from the days before computers were commonplace, and so writing by hand has always ...

I write primarily with pen and paper, so my posture depends on where I'm writing. If it's in class, my posture is horrible, but I blame it on the desks/chairs/fact ...

You put your pants on one leg at a time—just like everyone else. Actually, I don't. I've always gone the route of sitting on my bed and slipping both legs ...

There were a couple issues with this. First off, punctuation. You use a lot of semicolons, and not all of those semicolons are properly used. Semicolons connect two independent clauses, ...

Bluntness time. I liked the content. I didn't like the presentation. This is something that's been bugging me for a while about your writing, actually, and it isn't limited to ...