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First things first, we need to set some terms straight. The axis is the point around which a body rotates. Rotation is spinning around an axis. rotation.png The tilt is ...

When it comes to my writing, I am very messy. I have notes jotted down on bits of paper here, margins of a notebook there, multiple stories in a single ...

I'm wondering how the scar translates from "scar gained from fighting a suspected murderer who was not the murderer" to "renewal of revenge". Especially since the friend has no twists ...

I hated this poem. Completely irrational, but I hated it nonetheless, and I shall attempt to vocalize/pinpoint exactly why. Beware, for this shall be LONG and ramble-ranty. But you already ...

On the front page, under the Leaderboards, you should see the link Enter Our Chat Room . Since you just joined today though, you won't be able to enter the ...

I agree with Tigersprite that reworking the sentence would be better instead of taking it out entirely. Informative speeches are intended to inform rather than entertain, so keeping your language ...

Hello there, psudiname. Here to review, as requested. Since you've already gotten a number of in-depth reviews on each chapter, I'll just focus on my general impressions of the story ...

Symbolism is basically when you take something and make it represent something else. For example, a sunset could be used as a symbol for death or an ending in addition ...

Everything is explained here , Jai.

The only time I really see anger at the government being justified is if you a) voted and b) had your vote essentially disregarded. The US is a representative republic, ...

Yes, though you have to keep in mind that how you go about spreading your messages will impact how many receive them. If your message is obviously the whole point ...

If you ever need/want help, Evi, I'd be more than happy to. Though seriously, the simplicity of the system is just lovely. If only more of my YWS friends shared ...

Finished with: Gen, Seph, Rosey Working on: psudiname

“ Council is asking you be restricted to the palace.” Council is the body of people that make decisions, and the people on them are councilors. Counsel is what is ...

Hello there, Seph. Here to review as requested. First things first: I agree with you that the title needs changing. When I first read it, I was ready to flail ...