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#8 guaiacol and woodsmoke perfume the air as horseradish grinds to a pulp, per- oxides stinging the nose and eyes as buffer sits on standby #9 I see shadows in ...

Amelia already made some good suggestions for the first stanza, but I think you could also take it in a more fanciful direction, namely by combining the ideas in several ...

Not all poems must rhyme. That's like saying all stories have to be novels. Just as there are different types of stories and ways to tell them, there are different ...

Further I said Helpful and none of the reviews helped me, at all, that is not an opinion. On the contrary, it is. But that's not the main issue here. ...

Well, then. As other people have said, ask for reviews. I've never gotten a helpful review doing that. If you request in the WRFF forum, you can ask that certain ...

You want a hint? Here several are. #6 O colon: our vow'd friend in times dire, each day invaded by the enigmatic why which should be ignored. Ask yourself: in ...

Usually hard and soft refer to the actual sound of the syllables. Hard syllables usually have a hard consonant/combination: b, d, g, j, k, p, q, r, t, tch, v, ...

Hey there. First thing I noticed was the space between each line. It's a bit distracting, so if you could edit them out, it would make it easier to read ...

I'm currently very stuck with a single request...it's actually starting to get embarrassing. >< You overestimate how picky I am. Yeah. Pickiness is my domain. /tangent

Don't ask. #5 There once, or wasn't, was a doc who lived in the iconic clock which stood above a certain town— strange how it did not fall down considering ...

I think what Cthulu was trying to say was that, while the quality is good, we're lacking a bit in the quantity department; not that he valued quality over quantity. ...

#4 By the light of the moon in the month of June sang the solemn, lonely loon to the distant, twinkling tune of the singing star above— and the star ...

Make me out of plastine, So you can mould me how you like. If I could tell you how much I liked these lines, we would be here all day. ...

#3 I wrote a poem for you the other day and read it to you last night over a table set for two in candlelight, set in a courtyard strewn ...

I wish I could say I liked this poem, but I didn't. There are a couple of reasons. The first reason is how fragmentary every stanza is. Perhaps it is ...