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  • Research Archives Re: Chapters to Explain Offscreen Events?

    I think that if you have to rely upon a flashback chapter or ginormous infodump to explain all the hows, then that points more to a problem with how you've ...

    Sep 7, 2016
  • Writers Corner Re: [Post Deleted]

    There's also the matter of how Mary was not black, but a Jew. PoC representation is important, but racebending is pretty easily offensive, and often an unnoticed form of erasure ...

    Sep 6, 2016
  • Writers Corner Re: Writing in episodic release format

    I am so sad more people aren't discussing this. So here I am. I love serials and serial writing, and the way I see it, having a serial structure ensures ...

    Aug 19, 2016
  • Writing Olympics 2016 Re: Results - Event 8: The Haikai Challenge

    In a shocking turn of events that shocked the judge, only two entries met all of the (admittedly quite stringent) criteria for modified haikai, with a number of notably experienced ...

    Aug 13, 2016
  • Writing Olympics 2016 Re: DT - Event 8: The Haikai Challenge

    @Lightsong There are no restrictions on the subject or source of inspiration. So long as the haikiai is humorous and follows the structure requirements, it will count.

    Aug 13, 2016
  • Writing Olympics 2016 Re: DT - Event 8: The Haikai Challenge

    Questions? Comments? Just want to talk about Japanese poetic forms? This is the place. If you have a question about how to go about writing a modified haikai, tag me ...

    Aug 12, 2016
  • Writing Olympics 2016 Re: Event 8: The Haikai Challenge

    The Haikai Challenge Summary: Write a 36-line poem using only stanzas with 5/7/5 or 7/7 syllable structures, with thw first stanza being 5/7/5 and the last stanza being 7/7. See ...

    Aug 12, 2016
  • Writers Corner Re: an idea for a magical boy series

    It's very different in tone, but have you ever seen Cute High Earth Defense Club ? If you haven't, I recommend it. It's funny, has a decent plot, some moral ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Writing Tips Re: The Character Clinic

    Just dropping in to say that cooking oil can absolutely result in fourth-degree burns, depending on the scenario. A scald will probably not result in fourth-degree burns, but if you're, ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Writing Tips Re: How do you develop characters and plots?

    You're welcome!

    Aug 2, 2016
  • Research Re: Native American Culture

    Well, a good start would be to figure out which tribe or nation you're writing about. There are hundreds, and each of them has their own distinct culture and traditions. ...

    Aug 2, 2016
  • Lounge, The Re: role play

    Moving this to The Lounge where more people will see it. I don't have time to RP, but hopefully someone else is interested!

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Writers Corner Re: Help me with my query?

    This latest draft is much better, and I think you're finally drawing near to the end. Molly wants to spend her summer before college winning the love of Noah. They’ve ...

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Writing Tips Re: How do you develop characters and plots?

    Try worrying about those things after you complete your first draft. Really. It's a lot easier to see problems (and sometimes solutions) when you're looking at a whole rather than ...

    Jul 28, 2016
  • Writers Corner Re: Writing Help

    One thing I think that needs to be said is that you should never, ever deliberately delete your writing. Even if it's the worst thing ever written. There's a few ...

    Jul 28, 2016


It's like everyone tells a story about themselves inside their own head. Always. All the time. That story makes you what you are. We build ourselves out of that story.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind