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Just glancing at this, I think I died of a tilde overdose. Please hold while I revive myself. --- So yes. Tilde overdose. I can see why they are placed ...

Solidly written, cute little moral, but I can't really find the sci-fi in this. The mention of Selkin makes me think the other side of the spec-fic coin, and this ...

The convicted rapist and murderer had escaped from police custody. The 16 year old was charged with raping and killing another girl around his age. He has long shaggy blonde ...

First things first: the contrast needs to be fixed. Right now, everything is so dark, it all blends into one dark blob at first glance, and that's coming from someone ...

This was very short. Aside from that, there's not much I can say except that it flowed well and the repetition actually worked pretty well, considering how short this piece ...

Cute. Hardly original though; that little mnemonic has been around for ages. Posting up things that aren't yours is never a good idea; it is usually plagiarism, and it can ...

The line breaks really threw me off and kept throwing me out of this piece. I think this would at least read more smoothly if you combined some of the ...

I am struck by the similarity of subject with your other set of lyrics. This set, however, is much easier to relate to since you have them grounded in the ...

They have much more stringent rules about how soon you can post your first piece of writing, and they require all critiques counted for whether or not a new piece ...

i r liric riter :B #11 Have you heard the sound of silence? It's a beautiful thing to be in a place so quiet you can hear your soul sing ...

A couple of things before I start the review proper: You might want to put the introduction/explanation under a spoiler. Some folks like to get to the work first without ...

My German professor had us watch it because she wanted us to read the view count back to her for practice. And she let it run to the end. She ...

I just can't buy the forest + walk across it in one day bit. Walking through forest is not exactly easy (though it depends on the type of forest), and ...

I won't be doing it the next year as I'll be preparing for GRE Y'know, what better way to prepare for the verbal section than flexing your poetry muscle? Pull ...

#10 I am a poker of potholes logical, from pinholes to sinkholes, quarries to kinks in the patterns of bonding, ever- probing the probable, prod-able chinks for a finger-hold like ...