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Re: Violet Saga: Chapter 8
I haven't read the previous chapters, so perhaps it isn't surprising that I'm confused, but when I say I'm confused, I mean I'm really confused. I'm so confused, in fact, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: City Of Love | Chapter 3
I rarely say this, but you really need more detail. At the same time though, you need fewer details. For instance, the only things you really describe are what she's ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Protective Clouds Chapter 1
I was in history class—staring out the window out of sheer boredom. Agreeing with Cairo here; this sentence was boring. It didn't grab my attention at all, and the rest ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Life or Death: An Analysis of Reinstatement
Hello there. First things first, a) this was incredibly long, and b) this was not made internet-reader-friendly. In your author's note, you mention that this is a completed novel with ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Not What They Appear
Hey there. Before I start the review proper, I'd just like to say that your formatting could use a bit of help. Right now, there's no spaces in between paragraphs, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: YWS group photo!
I want to be a saber-tooth tiger with cataracts. Correction. A proudly sitting saber-tooth tiger with cataracts. :3
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Lethero's Math Help
There's a formula for solving problems like that where you set the rate (a variable) as the numerator over each given time in the denominator and set set the sum ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Girlfriends and boyfriends at the age of 10 - 15
And that PROVES maturity. Self-realization. I'll explain... I, knowing myself and the age groups below me (due to my recent membership) know that I am not mature enough as of ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: We Shall Pen [Now with Guide Track!]
\o/
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
I had fun today. flashmagic.png glare.jpg tongue.png haughty.png Dover is traumatized, but she'll get over it. Especially after I get some paint on her face. >:3
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted, but you now have the irresistible compulsion to correct everybody all the time, and so are shunned from society since no one likes a know-it-all, and you are a ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Answer a question with a question game
Why not?
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Girlfriends and boyfriends at the age of 10 - 15
With that said, I think, 21-year-olds and younger are waaaaay too immature to have a real relationship. ;) This 21-year-old is inclined to agree, with the caveat that there are ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: YWS Lingo
The Purps vs. Blues wars were epic.
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Review Teams!
I was confused, though--I don't remember clicking "join" before I was added to a group, and when I clicked the link to take me to my group, it led me ...
Apr 29, 2011