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Re: Summer Will Suck.
I am loopy from a combination of a whole lot of things like pain and lack of sleep. You have been warned. ignoring the obnoxious come-ons of a certain noxious ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Welcoming
To get a badge, you have to be nominated by your peers and then, if your posts look good enough, you'll be approved by the mod team. This way, though ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: JabberHut
I read the title + tagline as "JabberHut like this!" and was duly confused.
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Fighting For The Words
The rhythm in this was quite off. For example, in this stanza: But only to burst, On my pearly whites, Draining down my throat, Gone like the sun, at night. ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Tillamook
I have missed your fiction so much (I prefer it over your poetry, truthfully), words fail to describe the glee I felt when I came across this piece. And then ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Ardently
There was a truce in your hands, nails blue, soothing my inflamed skull while snow drift conversations blew into my eyes. This stanza caught my eye right away, and I ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Ebony Road
Hey there, and welcome to YWS! Before I begin my review, I'd like to point out that the formatting need some fixing. Since YWS has a plain-text editor, you'll have ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Another Obnoxious Blade
As classy and silent have already mentioned, the character's self-castigation and guilt felt a bit repetitive because there was so much, and it wasn't until almost halfway that you revealed ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: I'm Sorry...
You might be interested to learn (if you didn't already know) that the four temperaments — Sanguine, Choleric, Melancholic, and Phlegmatic — have been around for a very long time, ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Satire.
Satires are most effective when they read like what they are satirizing. Writing satires requires a subtle use of humor and irony, though you have to be careful not to ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Pysics questions
For 1, you're dealing with impulse, so you'll need the total mass of the train and passengers, their velocity, and the time needed to stop the train to find it's ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: magnets
Fellow Nudibranch! I hail you! And send a review your way in the glorious name of our team. ;P --- Normally when I point out spacing, I'm telling folks that ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
haha no fighting but you go girl! stick up! (even though i cant most of the time) You guys are all H-O-T!!!!!!!!!! O.o ....i didnt say that...nope! it was just ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Will Terrorism increase?
Terrorism is such a broad and general term, and there are so many different groups of terrorists, even among Islamic extremists. You'll have to be quite a bit more specific.
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Ads?
You should report this in the Report a Site Bug thread . I'm pretty sure that's not supposed to be happening. Be sure to include what browser you're using.
May 3, 2011
