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You had a great flow and rhythm going on, right up until the last two lines, but then you lost it. You have 9 and 7 syllables in the last ...

pennyflipper comes around, spots some copper on the ground building up, and luck is bound to smile at him with upside downed: a silly superstition since copper dropped is copper ...

Short stories generally are broken up into scenes. In a longer work, a single scene could be a single chapter, but short stories are too short to have chapters. The ...

Okay. First things first. The formatting of your post is atrocious. Why is your author's notes in quotes? It draws unnecessary attention to it, aside from looking extremely ugly when ...

Backtrack to Part 2 She looked more like her aunt every day, and Arnold wondered how no one else had noticed, even as he was grateful: a child fatherless through ...

It is possible to sense certain things from behind, like electronics that have been switched on or a person approaching, and some people generate unusually strong EM fields that interfere ...

I must say, it's a nice change of pace to see something short from you for once. ;P have I ever told you how the men at the pool molested ...

Following in Jagg's quite sensible footsteps... Name: Garis (now also known as Baron Bullhollow) Age: Somewhere in his early 20s; being an orphan, he doesn't know his birthday or -year ...

I was born on the wettest, coldest, stormiest day of the last decade. The midwife; my aunt, predicted to my mother that this meant I would do great things. I ...

Backtrack to Part 1 Selena was furious. The hound had very nearly ruined everything with how it had leapt onto the sad excuse for a dinner table and wolfed down ...

Following up: The posts eventually got through (I'm not sure of exactly how long, but it took around 30 minutes), and with how many times I tried submitting, I was ...

Sarah hated that stupid prince and his stupid gloves and his stupid cat. It was his fault Hund was dead, and she would never forgive him for killing her only ...

Time of Incident (include your timezone): 3PM EST Browser: Firefox 4.0 Page You Were On: Reply page for this topic and this topic Describe What Happened: I wrote up my ...

College essays really aren't that different from the ones you wrote in high school. Depending on the type of essay you have to write (persuasive, informative, anecdotal, etc.), you may ...

I write mostly vignettes, and really, they're one of my favorite things to write. They're just long enough to give you something to think about or say what you want ...