Kale

Banned for having an avatar that makes my eyes go @_@.

Second person in general is extremely difficult to pull off without annoying your readers ("No, I would not do that" being a very common response), especially with longer works. First ...

Agree that they are unintentional consequences, but disagree with most everything else. His whole argument hinges on males pretty much developing these problems in gendered isolation. There is no ackn

Banned for being in the closet. Wardrobe. Whatever.

This might be better posted in the Report a Site Bug thread. A bit more detail would also be helpful. Where are you seeing that you have one review? Is ...

How does it all tie together? Right now, as far as I can see, you've got all these ideas running amok without any clear connections between them. Why is Idea ...

You can't keep stuffing cash inside your blouse or something. So in that case you have to rely on men completely, right? Bra-stuffing is rather common from what my female ...

We had been traveling for a good space of time and I had bored of the silence. “Let’s stop when we reach Wayd this evening. I’ll rent a room at ...

Again, Stella pretty well covered everything I would have said, so I'll just point out some particular things that could be worked on. Such as Zavier's reaction to Victor's refusal ...

I liked this chapter, especially the ending scene with the sleeping potion. It might not contribute anything directly to the plot, but it's little scenes like those that make the ...

I liked this chapter much better than the previous one. The dryad was interesting, and I especially liked how you incorporated the traditional bargaining fairies were notorious for. There was ...

Stella pretty much nailed everything, so I don't have much to say. XD So just consider me seconding everything she pointed out, especially the Princess' dialogue. It could do with ...

I liked Daldiana's letter since it really showed how close the two were, though I wonder why it seemed like Zavier had forgotten about it (rather than deliberately waiting until ...

I could tell a harsh life had hardened him and he would be a worthy traveling companion. How does he know this? There's very little shown us about Victor that ...

The man eyed me suspiciously, probably wondering if I would dirty a bath up beyond repair. This sentence struck me as rather abrupt and lacking transition from the previous chapter. ...