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Re: YWS Screencaps
Rosey, Like button = NOT ENOUGH!!! *dies*
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Little Fleas
Since this is so short, you'll be getting a rare line-by-line. ;) People don’t stop in the gypsy market. Good first sentence. They keep their hands on their purses and ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: SPEW
I just assumed SPEW still stood for Snoink's Perfectly Evil Minions. *shrugs* But wouldn't that be...SPEM? Snoink's Perfectly Evil Worshippers. Fixed.
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Is This Story Idea Interesting?
It does sound interesting, but there are a couple of questions you'd need to address early on. Why is he falling out of zeppelin-like vehicle? Did he jump? If so, ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: .gif images?
I could also manually resize it for you, if the result from Gif Resizer doesn't look nice. Just PM me a copy of the original. :)
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Science Fiction Versus Fantasy
Science fiction is limited by science. If science has disproved something, a piece of science fiction cannot include that something as a major element and still be taken seriously as ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: thomas sabo
I am guessing this was a spam post posted by a bot as only spam posts are deleted, which leads to awkward, partial conversations floating in midair like the one ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: El Protetor (Part 4)
Hello there. I haven't read the previous parts, but there were a couple of issues that stood out to me that I believe are independent of the rest of the ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Removed.
This review is a completely pointless review whose purpose is to be a review only in characters because nobody can rightly review a piece that has been deleted, and seeing ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Black Hearted Raven
For a first chapter, this brings up a lot of questions. Now, this could be a good thing, and it usually is, but some of the questions I had were ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Fauxwinds Chapter Three
It probably doesn't help that I haven't read the previous chapters, but this was quite confusing, and not in the way I think you intended it to be. Everything moved ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: A Day They Would Never Forget: Chapter Four
Let me preface this by saying that I remember 9/11. I had just delivered the attendance sheets to the office when the TV they always have playing the news switched ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Prevailing Darkness - Chapter Four
The wolf emerged from the shadows, its wet black nose twitching. It hesitated, sniffing the air, and took another step forward, it’s eyes glued to my hands. I looked down ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Bowl of Rice
That. Is. So. Cute. Now for some nitpicks! The shading on the bowl is barely noticeable. I think the reason is that the spacing between the dithering is too wide ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Changing Shadows, Chapter Three
Hello there. I shall be reviewing you this fine Review Day, and though I have not read the previous chapters, I hope I can still be helpful. That said, my ...
Aug 28, 2011
