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Re: Is This Trilogy Suicide?
There have been series in the past that followed several generations that have worked, so it definitely could work. Even if there hadn't been, if it's the best way you ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Can I get some help please?
You can post up stories in parts. Just be sure to make note of this in the title. Something like "Title (Part x)" works. Just curious, but how long is ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: I Only See You In Home Films
culling memories to be tossed, This line reads oddly. "Culling" implies completely removing, and you can't toss something that has already been removed from your possession. that lets my dry ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: The Greater Evil
Though forged in the fires of mountains fell and born of a Dark Lord's luminal research Mom is calling customer service; she must be desperate. The spike pits are filled ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: A thread about animation
Maya
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Character's Voice/Personality - Trouble Deciding, Opinions?
Number two for reason stated by poster above.
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: All of My Stories and Poetries
Also agreeing with IcyFlame. Posting each of these separately will make them much easier to read, which will make it more likely people will read and review them. As it ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Time of Incident: 10:30ish EST Browser: Firefox 5.0 Page You Were On: Describe What Happened: I submitted my review but got no points, even though it was counted as a ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: A Stolen Life: A Memoir
This is a bit bare on details. You have the barest, basic premise laid out, but there's no real context or introduction to the memoir, and so there's no real ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Eye of the Storm
The rhyme in this was so obviously forced, it was painful to read. I only just managed to make it to the third stanza before I gave up and took ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: sunday spices
aching I think having this word on a line all its own is a bit much. It brought the flow to a grinding halt for me as "aching" felt overly-emphasized. ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: YWS Screencaps
And now I bring to you Galerius, calling someone cute. YWSGalCute.png I just wish that someone hadn't been me. ;.;
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: YWS Screencaps
In which we have a reaction: YWS3Mscreenshot.png
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Death in a paper roll.
Pleasure? It's hard to tell. This did not fit, and it's rather obvious that you inserted this here just to satisfy a reviewer. Even though the cigarette is buried beneath ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Science Fiction Versus Fantasy
So, Kyllorac, may I assume that you believe Fantasy has a broader scope? Tell me, what does Fantasy have that could defeat the all-knowing QAI? Entities that can create and ...
Sep 4, 2011
