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Re: Dreams Tell Lies (Contest Cover)
There is no color unity to be found in this. There's a very icky yellow, a lurid red, black, intense blue, and puce. The puce and yellow in particular are ...
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Re: How I Color Hair on GIMP
Pretty good tutorial; nice and simple, and easy to follow. I find that using different sizes of brush adds a lot of volume and definition to hair especially. Going back ...
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Re: Cliche, etc.
I shall number them 1-7 from top to bottom and refer to them accordingly. But before I go onto specifics, I SPY FLOATING CHARACTER SYNDROME! Fear not, though. We all ...
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Re: Lined Paper *gasp*
So cute. Since these aren't serious drawings, you are spared critiques, but I must say, your creatures especially are cute. Ignore the turtle? Why would I ever want to ignore ...
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Re: Nostalgia
The blur does add a nice unifying theme to all the pictures, but in some of the, it's a bit extreme and detracts from the image. If you have an ...
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Re: Mechanical Rape
I drink to the point that I believe I can free you and I Wouldn't it be nice to lay in the grave dug by sweet Death? The "I" at ...
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Re: Chasing Crumbs
I am not an angel as I comb back my hair, because I swear at God all the while in my head in, vile, twisted words like the teeth of ...
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Re: All Tolerated, Now Peace.
Being honest here, but this wasn't particularly poetic. It was a bit too literal, and there was nothing about this poem that makes it unique or stand out from all ...
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Re: Pieces
Isey is a rather interesting name. I'm curious what the in-story explanation for it is. That said, she does not sound like a healthy individual; quite the opposite, in fact. ...
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Re: nacht
I was not expecting to see a prose poem. I am overjoyed to see a prose poem. The form is so under-appreciated, and you did a wonderful job working within ...
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Re: The search for Partiling Pyrimid part 2
Needew Just a comment, but this name makes me think "need ew" with "ew" as in "grossness". That said, it is consistent with the name of his country, so it's ...
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Re: Stone Soup for Soul
The one thing that really stood out to me was the names of the locations. Why did you choose Fallujah and La Paz? Fallujah is located in Iraq while La ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Hate Spelled Out
Poetry is inherently a spoken form of expression; all poems should be written to be read aloud, so your disclaimer strikes me as being quite odd. from this Sage? This ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Feedee
This review is a completely pointless review whose purpose is to be a review only in characters because nobody can rightly review a piece that has been deleted, and seeing ...
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Re: Jump
I read the last line as "underneath the stairs". Yeah. I do confuse myself on a rather regular basis. That said, I believe the reason why Dreamwalker linked you to ...
Sep 16, 2011
