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Yup. Potatoes and tomatoes are native to the New World. ;P

We quickly stuff Our hair under Our helmet, safely out of reach. "We shoot it yes. Before it plays with Our hair." We go to do so. "WAIT!" cries Lumi ...

We crouch down behind the handy rock, trusty .38 in hand, one eye peeled for the zombie menace. We had been expecting a zombie apocalypse, but We had never expected ...

How about a case that's better? We'll agree that rhymes can fetter poetic expression simply because we're taught in school that rhyming was the One Thing that makes a poem ...

For all your insistence upon your proficiency in writing, your punctuation in particular displays a lack of poetic consideration. Grammatical acceptability aside, your punctuation more often than not

I think, deep in your heart of hearts (or maybe not so deep if the Author's Note is any indication), you know this isn't great, or even good, poetry. Let's ...

TV Tropes , if you're not already familiar with the site, has a whole list of tropes and examples on almost every aspect of storytelling. Looking up Anti-Hero is a ...

It's a bit difficult to help since no editing is allowed, but I will say that this reads as a mini essay all its own. It's fine if you're writing ...

p40fb89929ht I'm surprised at how low my Logical is. I'm not really a math person, but my problem-solving and puzzle skills are formidable. --- 4hj0d97795sz And retaking the test resulted ...

I will say before I even begin that the subject squicks me. Squicks me like all unholy hell. That said, the only reason I can see this being called a ...

People not in the club can see everything, including the info tab, but because they're not members, they cannot post. In order to join the club, they have to have ...

It does help if you have a solid background in Japanese culture. There are a lot of references to myths and spiritual beliefs that tie the entire movie together. Comparing ...

Silly person. I don't particularly like poetry. I happen to prefer excellently-written prose. :P That said, I'm afraid this piece just doesn't hit the right notes for me. From the ...

I wish these pictures were larger and a bit clearer. Upping the contrast wouldn't hurt, either. That said, you have an interesting style that reminds me of someone, only I ...