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Our savage souls is not to be forgave This line doesn't make sense. The proper tense is "forgiven", but even correcting that, it's just weird-sounding. I'd suggest rewording entirely. "Our ...

Hello there. I haven't read the previous parts, but hopefully I can still be of help. Overall, this is pretty solidly written. My only real quibbles are with the punctuation ...

18:00, Thursday @ Shaw Boulevard, Tablado boys decided to have their 'first boys' night out' in Manila. As usual, J.J. couldn’t come with them for some excuses, I mean reasons. ...

Before I begin the review proper, I'd just like to point out that parodies need not be outright funny. They often are, but they do not always need to be ...

It's difficult to take this review seriously as a review for several reasons. First, and most importantly, this is all opinion-based. You really don't give us examples from the movie ...

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Personally, I felt like you took a thesaurus and tried to write a piece with as many uncommon words simply because those words were uncommon and not because they were ...

Reading through this, I was left wondering if you wrote this as a school assignment. A lot of the sentences, especially "Well, I do not know that someone, but perhaps ...

This was very blunt. Now, there's nothing wrong with blunt, and I can appreciate and/or enjoy it, and goodness knows I tend to employ it heavily myself since it makes ...

This could be really great, however, there are a couple of issues that prevent it from being so. Some of it has to do with formatting. Right in the middle, ...

This was quite interesting, and I like how you approached it descriptively rather than analytically. It makes for more compelling reading. Unfortunately, I felt that things fell apart right at ...

I'm surprised at how short this is. In fact, I think it could use a bit of lengthening, particularly at the end. You do a good job voicing the doubts, ...

You had me gripped from the first paragraph, and while there were a couple of details that made me stop to look at them a little closer (like the mention ...

I haven't read the first two parts, but after reading this, I think I just might. I'm a huge sucker for fairytales and Classical mythology, and I see here that ...

I only really have one comment about this piece, and it has to do with the ending. You mentioned remembering the same thing being done to Laura Ingalls Wilder by ...