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We’re all as alone as we choose to be. Surrounded only by darkness we choose to see. Hearing only the words we choose to hear. Manipulating the messages until they’re ...

many errors. So, so many errors. Murtuza was kind enough to point out most of them, but honestly, there is no excuse for that many, especially considering that the misspellings ...

Bulwark (Nautical) a solid wall that encloses a deck to protect people or objects Polish our iron love so that it never rusts. Bathe it in solution; scrape off the ...

“Check mate” she hisses in my ear, "Checkmate" is one word. Also, as it is part of the queen's dialogue, there should be a comma before the quotations close, so ...

I believe that depends on the version you play. ;) I remain unsurpassed on two versions. u_u @murt - If I knew how, I would be getting better scores.

Seems like a role to me, and since it's tied to a specific gender, it seems like a gender role. Correction: it is tied to a specific sex . Sex ...

Evolutionarily, and biologically, a lack of variety leads to stagnation, which in turn leads to extinction due to a severe limitation in adaptability. See: the Great Famine of Ireland. Basically, ...

I find it hilarious that my scores are still unsurpassed.

You did nothing wrong Little errors like this, combined with the lack of consistent punctuation, really hurt your poem. As it stands, I really didn't feel anything from it. It ...

I only saw a River of Tears. That title drop is so painful... so, so painful... Title drops work best when they are subtle. The italics and capitalization are really ...

Depends on the story. Does your story call for a bloodbath, or is it one of those light-hearted ones where the worst thing to happen to a character is they're ...

That's my favorite site for everything English grammar-related, and it also has information on how to cite sources and such. That said, TwistedMuffins already covered the punctuation, so I'll just ...

In their abode above the alpine crests, cast in light shed by stars, she mourns. The sun is dead. The earth below, who long since saw its final swan, ____________ ...

Before I go into specifics, the first thing I'd like to mention is the formatting. I'm not sure why you broke this poem up into two-line stanzas, but it struck ...

You could also post your story in General. That's where all the stories that don't fit in a particular forum go.